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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on April 09, 2005
    COOOOOOOL
    whew, i'm lovin this
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  • From ANON - Blaze Waterflower on April 08, 2005
    Hey finally made it on to the site and I love the new chapter keep going. Your doing great.
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  • From ANON - fat man on April 06, 2005
    these stories are great, keep writing them plz!!!!!!!!! also good luck on finals im doing MCAS.......yeah...........i'm 18....sure
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  • From BrianChattillon on April 04, 2005
    Read upto chap 5.
    I found this most insightfull and well thought out indeed.
    Hehe Man to be in BB's Place damn lucky Bas***d indeed!.

    I will wait paitentlly like a good horny maniac(J/K on the Maniac part!)
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From ANON - Jackdaw on April 03, 2005
    *snickers*update soon
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  • From ANON - FireStarter on April 02, 2005
    Nice story it is rly good but I have a small favor would u mind puttin a few spaces between paragraphs? I am not sayin ur story suchs or anything spaces would jus make it easier to read. Plz don't hate me! Love ur story keep it up!

    Love Lots,
    Fire
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 31, 2005
    the title well suits the story. you're an awesome fanficcer (did i spell that right)
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  • From ANON - Rioshy on March 31, 2005
    PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if you took all the sex out I bet you could send this into cartoon network and actually get it made into an episode JUST my thoughts.....
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  • From ANON - billy on March 30, 2005
    good chapter please continue

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  • From ANON - Blaze Waterflower on March 30, 2005
    No you can't stop now keep going!! I'm loving the story! please let me know when the next chapter is up.
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  • From ANON - RavenGothGirl on March 29, 2005
    i am so freakin sonfused. It is okay, nothing special. Oh yeah you said something about kim possible. cool i want to read when your done, but i don't know where to go because i found this site a long time ago on google. tell me. Carly Adams- I mean RavenGothGirl>.
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  • From ANON - Wrathchylde on March 29, 2005
    I dig it. Your formatting needs lots of work and your grammar needs a little help too but you've got a story going here that's drawing me in despite all that. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jackdaw on March 28, 2005
    Awsome, update soon
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  • From BrianChattillon on March 28, 2005
    An Enigmatic fourth chapter indeed!
    Cyborg and Star sittin i9n a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!

    Robin and Slade tied in the ditch. all because of an earthmoving BITCH!
    Shaman Raven and BB in a threesome Scene. He ain't no Hulk but by god HE is Green Lean and on the scene!
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  • From ANON - pat on March 28, 2005
    GREAT story! i really hope you make a fourth chapter, im really looking forward to it!
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