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Reviews for raven learns focus

By : lowteck
  • From ANON - Xinothium on December 23, 2005
    Great job man, I'm loving this story. I hope you update soon, I'm really looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - nonengel on December 12, 2005
    interesting development for this story so far, the shaman character within beast boy was an interesting touch.
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  • From ANON - TheBlue on December 10, 2005
    Great story so far man, I love it. I hope you have some straight up romance later in the story, I'd love to see some BB/Rae that has a romantic side to it as well as a steamy side. Great job man keep up the awesome work.
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  • From ANON - Dragona (IE is being a bitch, so I can't login T_T) on December 08, 2005
    I got 4 words for you... Er, I mean 4 letters, wait, I mean-- Doh! Forget it.. Your story is pretty good. But here's some honest advice. Your story is good and all, but it's lacking Double spacing between paragraphs. My eyes are hurting just to find the spot I left off in your paragraphs.
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  • From ANON - adara on December 08, 2005
    I love it like a maddly fattly baby (dun ask...)

    Yes I love your story, it made my day and I really do think you should continue with it. exsactly how you should run with it I can not say... I'm horrible at writting stories and i do not wish to ruin what you started.
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  • From ANON - Dude87 on December 07, 2005
    Wow man, great story. I love this thing. Keep up the great work. Also, I'd like to suggest not having Raven get pregnant. I can understand her getting pregnant later (if the story, or maybe a sequel to it. goes that far in the future.) but not right now. You could have Beast Boy ask her about it or something. And have her say something about preforming a spell on herself to keep it from happening. Like a "birth control spell".
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  • From ANON - Max on December 07, 2005
    wow...that was...great. I really think that that is one of the best stories I have ever read. keep it up, I look forward to reading more of your works.
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  • From ANON - Shard on December 07, 2005
    Thank you, this is got to be one of my favorite stories and I loved the new chapter and hope you continue. I really don't know where you could take this story, maybe there lives back at the tower after a little more time down under.
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  • From ANON - nos482 on December 07, 2005
    woo nice add on, and I cant wait for the next BBXRae all the Way
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  • From Pndrgn on October 15, 2005
    Wow, Time enough for love was a fantastic chapter!! Puts things in perspective and reminds me of a Gundam WIng quote. So cool. Loving your story. Insignificant when compared to a grand scale. So real. so cool.
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  • From ANON - bloodrain on October 14, 2005
    i like it please write more

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  • From ANON - Miraku on October 10, 2005
    Goddamnit this is one of the best ones i have ever read

    feel free to make more........GODDAMN
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  • From ANON - nos482 on October 04, 2005
    dude that was one of the best bb/rae fics i ever read, very awesome should do a sequel sometime for this
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  • From ANON - Asinine11 on October 02, 2005

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  • From ANON - MadMagnum on August 03, 2005
    Ijust read chapter 7 and all I have to say man is wow, just wow..
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