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Reviews for raven learns focus

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  • From ANON - Jackdaw on March 26, 2005
    Please continue
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  • From ANON - sinkore on March 26, 2005
    yea, please continue id like to see where this goes

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  • From BrianChattillon on March 26, 2005
    I have read up to chapter 3. I Have found it very erotic and done in a tasteful yet sentual manner given the scenarios in question.

    I do indeed look forward to more on this peice.
    BrianDarksoul(Shikima wannabe!)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2005
    Hell yes continue!
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  • From ANON - Shard on March 26, 2005
    Great story I'm lovin it and I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2005
    If you end it there then i will beat you, no j/k just continue and i will be happy, KEWL? good
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  • From ANON - Jeff on March 26, 2005
    We like we like continue, you can't have one without going through their emotions especially when it involves raven. KUTGW
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 25, 2005
    will there be more?
    tell me there'll be more...
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  • From ANON - ??? on March 25, 2005
    That was great please finish this.(and maybe you could make him a bit more than 8 inches, just a suggestion)
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  • From ANON - sinkore on March 25, 2005
    hell of a good story so far please write some more

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  • From ANON - Jackdaw on March 24, 2005
    cool! upadte soon
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  • From ANON - Fidam on March 23, 2005
    DUDE! YOU GOTTA UPDATE MORE!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! *on hands and knees grobelling*
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  • From ANON - rena on March 21, 2005
    yes! please continue! i love the beast boy/ raven match up, i wanna see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - troutman on March 21, 2005
    Very good. Please tell me this was just the beginning.
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on March 20, 2005
    ohhh, i though the title said she LOSES focus
    that was sick. real F+ material, he-he-he-heh.
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