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Reviews for raven learns focus

By : lowteck
  • From ANON - ??? on May 09, 2005
    also maybe next chapter he'll be too tired to shift to get out of her(maybe he'll have to strech her some more?) although then i supposed you'd have to edit it, but i think it would be more interesting
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  • From ANON - ??? on May 09, 2005
    yay finally new chapter is great. although i think she could take more >_>
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  • From BrianChattillon on May 08, 2005
    Read Chaptrer 7 all I have to say is ........... Woah!
    Damn that was the most devious anbd rather raunchy somewhat evil chappie indeed?
    I wonder if lust will get out to play later on as well .

    Damn that was intense indeed If you happened to be BB!

    All in all a damn good chappiue
    Now I am off to play MegaMan X Command Mission
    BrianDarrksoul~
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on May 08, 2005
    damn that wass hot! and i think i mean that literally.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 01, 2005
    read the first 3 chapters and just came back to it today to find that you added more, love it, paints a beautiful picture in the last scene and the story melds effortlessly from lust to love. is this it though? you HAVE to keep this going it's excellent
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  • From ANON - Miraku on April 26, 2005
    this story is kickass dude
    keep it going
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  • From ANON - Conquester on April 24, 2005
    HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME WAIT! THE MIGHTY CONQ DEMANDS YOU PUT UP ANOTHER.... *thinks for a moment* THREE CHAPTERS! Two?! Ok ok, one at least, for me, please? Donn make me begg, i dont like begging... IT aint pretty. o.o;;
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  • From ANON - fat man on April 20, 2005
    i liked this story ALOT!!!!!
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  • From ANON - reader on April 17, 2005
    get to the sex scene already
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  • From ANON - Mav Gauntlet on April 16, 2005
    Awsome dude!!!! Please update soon and dont skimp on the BB and Rea explicity!!!!!


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  • From ANON - ??? on April 15, 2005
    FINISH IT >_
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on April 14, 2005
    DAMN! THAT was a good fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on April 14, 2005
    Not bad, not bad at all. Better than many Raven/BB pairings. Only a few quibbles, but mainly minor grammar/spelling errors. I agree that some paragraph spacing is in order, but again tis just a little thing. Please write beyond ch. 6.
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  • From BrianChattillon on April 14, 2005
    Read the time enough for love chapter. Beautiful indeed Lowtech.
    Well I gotta get back to bed as my retina's need sleepy time!

    Keep up the good work whenever possible
    BrianDarksoul~
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2005
    Good job, and at the end there, does that mean ur gonna end it 'cause you better not until... well... "things" happen between rae and bb. 'Cause that would make this story complete. Good job, UPDATE SOON, (please?)
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