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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how Raven came to terms with her emotions, I wish I could do that, it would make life so much easier. It was beautiful how you portrayed Lonliness, capturing the essence of the emotion and personifying it. You have so much talent as a writer, may I bear your children?
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice work on the artistic references in chapter 1. It was great!! It sure is cool how you and the other aff writers can apply so much detail throughout your stories so constantly. Keep up the good work!! :D
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, I must have more! TerraxRaven is the best TT pairing there is!
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm, i would like to read more please.
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Spin! :)
I like the idea. I am anxious to see where you are going with this. :P
It seems to me that you are hurrying this or forcing it a little.
Your choices of words in some spots seems...odd?
ex: 'contemplate her thoughts'
'conflicted expression'
It just doesn't flow as smoothly as your very polished stories on jr. fanfic.
Only my humble opinion. Please don't hurt me. lol
Vin
I like the idea. I am anxious to see where you are going with this. :P
It seems to me that you are hurrying this or forcing it a little.
Your choices of words in some spots seems...odd?
ex: 'contemplate her thoughts'
'conflicted expression'
It just doesn't flow as smoothly as your very polished stories on jr. fanfic.
Only my humble opinion. Please don't hurt me. lol
Vin
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December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi again, A!
Assuming you are still reading something with my name on it, I liked this better.
Seems more...you. Nicer flow. Clean.
Okay, so when do we get to the, uh, fun? Hee Hee.
Vin
Assuming you are still reading something with my name on it, I liked this better.
Seems more...you. Nicer flow. Clean.
Okay, so when do we get to the, uh, fun? Hee Hee.
Vin
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue this fic i wanna see some romance and some action :P
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I enjoyed your firt work in this seriesmore, although this shows alot of potential. This is one of the better yuri fics on the site, seeing as it is centered around more than smut. Raven is one of my favorite characters, and I'm really enjoying your take on a Terra/Raven fic. I'd like to see this continued, but don't force it. A fic written just because people wanted a sequel may as well have not been written. Let the words and the fics flow naturally and you can't go wrong.
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read both of your fan ficitions. They are really well written and the stories are excellent. Raven and Terra are my favorite Teen Titans characters, which is why I like these fan ficitions so much. I hope you are going to add more chapters to "Hope" because you've done great so far. i look foward to reading more of your work.