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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... I think I know what's going on here...
Since you encouraged us to guess, here's my prediction:
Before, in the episode with Soto and the green dog, Raven and Starfire were 'trying to contact the spirit world'. I think that Raven's going to remember that, and contact the underworld and ask them for help on how to bring Terra back. People say that once you're dead, you know everything, right?
Anyway, I love the story. It's great. Even if I'm wrong, I can't wait to see what's next. Update soon! This story rules!
Since you encouraged us to guess, here's my prediction:
Before, in the episode with Soto and the green dog, Raven and Starfire were 'trying to contact the spirit world'. I think that Raven's going to remember that, and contact the underworld and ask them for help on how to bring Terra back. People say that once you're dead, you know everything, right?
Anyway, I love the story. It's great. Even if I'm wrong, I can't wait to see what's next. Update soon! This story rules!
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i bet that star makes raven forget about terra and they get it on. kool story. keep going
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think that raven's going to ask star if terra was alive in the future when she went there with warp.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic. It's nice that you post frequent enough installments to keep us all satiated and interested, it more than makes up for a lack of length in them. In rereading I saw a big error with my previous theory, that being the Hope already existed and I forgot its mention, but kudos to the winner, I tip my two pointed harlequins hat to you.
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel strangely compelled to adress it here, but personally, for all the starfire/raven fans, I think it'd be interesting to see their pairing in a one shot in the puppet master episode. Definately in Plot-What-Plot form though. I think I felt like saying this because of how wrong I thought turnnig this fic into a RaveFire one would be at this point when I read a certain noones review.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personally, sometime in the near future, I'm seeing a new emotion coming to join tha council that Raven herself will name Hope. Also, I do pray to god that you don't pull off Starfire talking about how its normal and common on her planet for girls to love other girls. It's always slightly irked me when people do that. Good job on chapters 3 and 4. You had me worried in two when it seemed kind of like the writing was forced, but my faith in this fic has been restored.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Spin! I must be dense today. (even more than usual.) Are you going Raestar on us, or does this have something to do with Starfire having travelled through time...Anyway-another great chapter. Good imagery and realistic dialogue. You portrayed Robin so dead-on in his talk with Raven! <- (yes, count it!) Vin.
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo dude! thought it was a pretty good chapter. the only thing i wonder is what will she do now that she knows that she lost the one she loved.
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Spin!
I could not wait to R&R this, after your taunting...Hee hee. Well, let's see: where to begin?
This (3) chapter was OUTSTANDING! The best dialogue for a 'coucil of emotions' I have seen thus far in my reading.
And no-I mean it. I am not sucking up. You have my promise that I never use exclamation points unless I feel they are necessary.
Okay, now get back to writing more of this, dammit-it's really getting interesting. ^_^
I could not wait to R&R this, after your taunting...Hee hee. Well, let's see: where to begin?
This (3) chapter was OUTSTANDING! The best dialogue for a 'coucil of emotions' I have seen thus far in my reading.
And no-I mean it. I am not sucking up. You have my promise that I never use exclamation points unless I feel they are necessary.
Okay, now get back to writing more of this, dammit-it's really getting interesting. ^_^
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked how well you expressed everything Raven felt towards Terra. It was clever of you to do it that way. You can tell Raven's kind of a lesbian because her emotions were talking about girls, like Lindsay Lohan instead of guys like Orlando Bloom or something. I really like this story. Keep writing. Update soon! :)