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Reviews for forbidden love

By : midnightrose26
  • From Kash on February 14, 2007
    Ok....I just finished the latest chapter.
    I love the last bit of'course!Kash being so "nice and gentleman-like" with Karai.
    Waiting for kash to "do her" now.....unless that leo-fella' stops it!

    More please!
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  • From ANON - Kash on November 09, 2006
    Ohboy ohboy!!!
    Yours truly shows up so you all know something's going to happen.
    Now I won't spoil what my next move is but stay tuned...
    ...in the same Kash story....with the same Kash superstar...

    Next time with....Kash!


    seriously....great chapter!!!
    And it's always fun to see yourself in a good fic.
    BRING IT ON BABE! :)
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  • From ANON - midnightrose on October 28, 2006
    YAY 1000 HIT THANK YOU ALL FOR READING AND REVIEWING MY STORY I REALLY LOVE HEARING FROM ALL OF YOU HOPEFULLY THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE UP SOON. THANKS AGAIN

    MIDNIGHTROSE
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  • From ANON - Kash on October 10, 2006
    edit.

    ok ok....so it had a short sweet sex scene....

    ....But where's the smut??Who wants sweet?


    Lol kidding.
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  • From ANON - Kash on October 10, 2006
    A sweet chapter.
    Although chap 4 had little sex-only a nude Karai(only??)-It was great.
    The best part had to be Raph angry at Leo leading into the flashback.
    It showed a side of leonardo that was just that-pure leo.

    Looking forward to more adventures taking part at the farmhouse.

    Hugs and kisses Kash.:)
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  • From ANON - Kash on October 04, 2006
    OH HELL YEAH!
    Just read chapter3.It had some nice moments.Like Mike and Karai cooking.(Funny stuff!)
    And the talk between the brothers about checking on Leo was really good too.
    As for saki looking(or drooling?)over that young young girl.......something hot about it(shame on me!)

    But the ending was the best part.
    Could feel tension build as they went up to check on Leonardo.
    Talk about bad timing!?!
    Watching as Leo and Karai were doin'g the nasty!

    Now how you gonna top this babe?
    Your story is hot.you are hot.
    ----------------------------------------
    your William Kash.
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  • From ANON - tmntwriter on September 19, 2006
    Great chapter!!
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  • From on December 10, 2005
    as promised, here is my review.
    O_O wow O_O. that is some serious sexual tension there.
    does karai get with leo, i gotta know. please write more soon.
    i didn't thik i could be drawn it by a story like this
    but when i got to the end of chapter two, i found myself asking
    the empty room what would happen next. it's a good story,
    and i would recoend it to anyone
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  • From Kash on June 23, 2005
    ahhhhh.......Leo and Karai....what can go wrong??more please:)
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  • From ANON - tmntwriter on May 07, 2005
    Ekkk i love a good cliff hanger!!! The story is coming along great, oh and thanks for the review for a well lit dark! Im glad you like it .. although you may not like later chapters but i can't say anymore i've already said too much!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DC on May 07, 2005
    O.O Wow, Good start so far, Are you a new User too? Love your writing, Keep it up, I love to see more
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  • From ANON - Rikkeru on February 27, 2005
    This a nice start to the story. Hope you update soon. Is this your first story? If not then I would like to read some of your another works.
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