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By : evilchild
  • From Sevslittlesecret on December 21, 2011
    Well apparently it's not finished, with the whole tbc thing, but I did enjoyed it. You might need to review this story though as I spotted a few mistakes here and there that looked like this: ththis. I'm sure it was most likely when you updated it.

    Oh! And I loved the scene when Robin was first seduced! "I feel hot... can you stop it Slade?" So cute! ^^
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  • From Sevslittlesecret on December 21, 2011
    I sorry I kinda laughed when you gave your reasons for making Slade 20, when he's immortal and around 70. *snickers*
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  • From NightmareAhead on June 14, 2007
    So cute! It better be real! lol
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  • From ANON - Adnexus Confatalis on September 05, 2006
    ITS INTERESTING, BUT YOU SHOULD CHECK FOR MISTAKES MORE, SEVERAL PLACES YOU HAD WORDS REPEATING, OR MISSPELED. ALSO YOU SHOULD FOCUS ON THE OTHER TITIANS FEELINGS FOR ROBIN, ONE MORE THING YOU CAN'T JUST BLUNTLEY SAY THINGS, YOU HAVE TO DESCRIBE IT MORE THAN TO OUTRIGHT SAY IT, FOR EXAMPLE JUST WHEN A CHARACTER IS WALKING YOU CAN DESCRIBE THE FOOTFALLS, THE SWAY OF THEIR HAIR, AN EMOTION ON THEIR FACE, WHAT THEY SEE AND THEIR INTERNAL THOUGHTS, GET IT?
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  • From ANON - Twilight on July 24, 2006
    I have really enjoyed the story so far please continue.

    May I suggest that you add on how Robin will tell Bateman that he is pregnant. If I remember correctly he is Robin's legal guardian.

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  • From ANON - Annie mea on July 22, 2006
    Oh my god! I love this fic absolutely. I just came by here to find Robin/Star fic but then I fuond this and fell in love with it (as I am head over heels in love with yaoi)
    This story really has a good plot and it's well written in my opinion so I hope you write more I'm really looking forward to it love ya
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  • From ANON - Caos on July 17, 2006
    I really enjoyed this story so far. It is a great read.

    I have a suggestion were is the babies room in the tower? What will it look like?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2006
    It's *Cyborg*, not Cybrog.
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  • From ANON - Rocky Wolf on November 05, 2005
    Please continue ASAP. This is by far the best one i've read on this cool site. Rocky.
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  • From ANON - lygger on November 04, 2005
    yes i realise that i am sending another revew that isn't a revew in the same night as the last one. it seams kind of retarded but i wanted to say a few thing after reading the other reviews. 1. to Sladegirl13.....FUCK YOU. 2.i also agree that slade and robin should talk about how the baby is going to come out. i hadn't realy thought of that as I was explaning posible ways of M/M conception. 3. PLEASE update soon, or e-mail me about this stroie and what gave you the ideas behind your plot. i'd love to know.

    P.S. to all of those out thair that think my explinations on conception are b.s. I'll be happy do debate or explain in further detail if you e-mail me and ask about it.
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  • From ANON - lygger on November 04, 2005
    to all of you out their who think it is imposible for a man to have a baby, I'm sorry to inform you that it is verry possible even in real life. You could either furtalize the egg and inject it into a small cavity in a mans body near the bladder. i don't know the name of it but it is there, look it up if you don't believe me. the featus is responsable for the groth of the umbilical cord so it may take a few trials befor the fetus latches on to a viable blood sorce. then the baby could gow normaly with hrt (hormone replacement theripy) untill it reaches term when it is removed via cecerian section. this approach is comonly practiced in infertal women and is aplicable to men with slight alterations to the homnes givin in hrt. then their is the verry real prospect of slight genetic alterations by nanites described in this story. then their is the most viable option to date. It involvs taking a virous like the flu and changing its dna through removal of of parts of it's dna by acid stimulation. following that parts of the original dna for the subrect is injected io ensure thatr the body won't reject the new traits. then the virous could be injected into the intended person. it would do as all virioses do and start changing the dna of cells it attacks and spreading through the boddy. it would take a constant period of injections for the mutation to take but when it does the chang would be semi-permannent and efective. manny other mutations such as furr and fang groth can be acheived through this method.
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  • From ANON - Harnia on October 10, 2005
    Bwahaha! This is great!
    I have been sickened of the ways how people twist what slash is really all about. You, my dear, have done the best. I have read most fictions of Slade/Robin and some consist of Robin turning into a girl only to bear Slade's child and have hot passionate sex.
    I personally believe that if you turn a guy into a girl, it's the worst punishment you can do to rip up a true slash pairing and break the heart of a yaoi whore, like myself.
    I loved you fiction and your little twists to it... although the team just seems a bit OOC... sex scenes are great, what more can I say?
    Keep up the good work!
    From a precious yaoi whore prat,
    -Harnia ;)
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  • From ANON - Dragon on September 25, 2005
    oops, pressed the wrong button...

    what was i going to say?...Ah! Yes, now i remmeber!

    You fucking bitch...

    [end message]
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  • From ANON - nacht kind on September 19, 2005
    goddammit! More, RARG!

    But you're writing! HOO-RAH! I am so excited, though I must admit to being surprised at the sudden 'time change'.

    Feeling rather un-reviewie(sorry ^^;;) but really excited/thrilled/pissingself that it's being continued and awaiting the next chapter
    ~Nacht
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  • From ANON - Deamon on September 18, 2005
    You asked for ideas, and I think that you should have slade walk in and have a big talk with Robin about it. If you don't mind the sapy endings you could have him and Slade run off together to raise the kid alone in another city. Or you could have someone kill Slade and Robin has to raise the kid alone. Eather way, it would be intersting to see witch one you pick.
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