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Reviews for raven learns focus

By : lowteck
  • From ANON - Christian on July 26, 2006
    all i can say is WOW!!! this story is absolutely amazing. u r a very talented writer! u create the great balance of romance and humour making this story a very worthwhile read. i look forward to reading many more stories from you :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2006
    Amazing story keep it up I can almost picture this in real life like it was happening right in frontof me.
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  • From ANON - FireKitty on June 14, 2006
    i have to say i started reading this when u were at chap3 and i really liked it and now that u have gotten farther i still think it is a very good story i love BB/Rav pairings dont stop

    PROPS to YA
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  • From ANON - Xinothium on January 10, 2006
    Great update, the bond you had Raven build with Beast Boy was very cool. I'm glad you did something like that. I've always figured Raven would end up building a deep connection with Beast Boy because she's more than just human. But I do want to know who that was in the Shaman's memory, I'm going to guess it was someone we already know (Amos, maybe). I don't know, but I really want to find out.
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  • From ANON - TheBlue on January 10, 2006
    Awesome additon, I like how you had Raven build a deeper bond with Beast Boy. Great job on that, I'm also curious as to who that was in the Shaman's memory. I'm looking forward to the answer to that question. For some reason I feel like the person she saw isn't going to be someone that hasn't already been mentioned in the story. Great work, and I hope you update as soon as you can.
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  • From BrianChattillon on January 10, 2006
    Chapter 1 Bpound by love.
    uite inmteresting erotic and surreal a testiment to the story sofar.
    have rather enjoyed reading this peice. hop[e there is more when time permits.

    A very touching and enigmatic bond between Shaman&Raven
    a unique way to strengthen both love and focus
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  • From ANON - Shard on January 10, 2006
    Awesome new chapter,keep up the good work and the shaman is really nice.
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  • From ANON - TheBlue on January 07, 2006
    Excellence, even the filler is great. Awesome job, and I do agree with Xinothium I think it'd be interesting to see some of their insecurities too. I also think it'd be interesting to see them talk about how what they did at the water tank was both their first time (I'm assuming they were virgins before hand, if they weren't then nevermind). But if it was I'd like to see them talk about it, or atleast comment on it. Just an idea, great story.
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  • From ANON - Xinothium on January 07, 2006
    Great chapter, you're doing great with this. But I there is one thing I think would be interesting to see. Since their last sexual encounter was more lust than anything else, I think it would be interesting if their next one showed each one's more gentle side, along with their insecurities. Nothing extreme but I still think it'd be more romantic that way.
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  • From ANON - Shard on January 03, 2006
    Control is overated, sometimes. Any way loved the chapter, a little short but more than enough to really make you want more. Please update soon. Oh puppy BB was a trip.
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  • From BrianChattillon on January 03, 2006
    An enigmatic tenth chapter.
    I will look at this other fic soon....... keep up the hard work
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  • From ANON - Shard on December 29, 2005
    Thank you for anouther great chapter, I just love the interaction between Rae and BB and the lizard bit. Looking forward to the next one.
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  • From DrapedInBlack on December 29, 2005
    I love this story sooooo much. Please continue! It's very different from what I'm used to reading and it's a very pleasent surprise. I can't wait to read what happens next! Update soon and keep up the kick ass work!

    -Black
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  • From bloodrain01 on December 29, 2005
    do me something real special finish the rest please your killing me here
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  • From ANON - Xinothium on December 28, 2005
    Alright, you've updated. Great chapter, I hope you keep it going for a little while longer. Atleast long enough for everything to be cleared up. And I also hope that after you finish this story you make more Teen Titan stories, perferably Raven/Beast Boy ones.
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