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Reviews for Hope

By : artemisgirl
  • From ANON - CryingCrypt on January 07, 2005
    I liked how well you expressed everything Raven felt towards Terra. It was clever of you to do it that way. You can tell Raven's kind of a lesbian because her emotions were talking about girls, like Lindsay Lohan instead of guys like Orlando Bloom or something. I really like this story. Keep writing. Update soon! :)
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  • From on January 04, 2005
    More, I must have more! TerraxRaven is the best TT pairing there is!
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  • From ANON - capcomfreak4life on January 04, 2005
    nice work on the artistic references in chapter 1. It was great!! It sure is cool how you and the other aff writers can apply so much detail throughout your stories so constantly. Keep up the good work!! :D
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  • From ANON - toria on December 28, 2004
    hmm, i would like to read more please.
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  • From ANON - vinnie the geek on December 24, 2004
    Hi again, A!

    Assuming you are still reading something with my name on it, I liked this better.
    Seems more...you. Nicer flow. Clean.
    Okay, so when do we get to the, uh, fun? Hee Hee.
    Vin

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  • From ANON - vinnie t g on December 24, 2004
    Hi Spin! :)
    I like the idea. I am anxious to see where you are going with this. :P
    It seems to me that you are hurrying this or forcing it a little.
    Your choices of words in some spots seems...odd?
    ex: 'contemplate her thoughts'
    'conflicted expression'

    It just doesn't flow as smoothly as your very polished stories on jr. fanfic.
    Only my humble opinion. Please don't hurt me. lol
    Vin

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  • From ANON - dude on December 13, 2004
    please continue this fic i wanna see some romance and some action :P
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  • From on December 11, 2004
    Personally, I enjoyed your firt work in this seriesmore, although this shows alot of potential. This is one of the better yuri fics on the site, seeing as it is centered around more than smut. Raven is one of my favorite characters, and I'm really enjoying your take on a Terra/Raven fic. I'd like to see this continued, but don't force it. A fic written just because people wanted a sequel may as well have not been written. Let the words and the fics flow naturally and you can't go wrong.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2004
    I read both of your fan ficitions. They are really well written and the stories are excellent. Raven and Terra are my favorite Teen Titans characters, which is why I like these fan ficitions so much. I hope you are going to add more chapters to "Hope" because you've done great so far. i look foward to reading more of your work.
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