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Beach Week	By : seyunolu Category: Web Comics > El Goonish Shive Views: 15676 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1
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Hello everyone! I am, once again, alive! My apologies for the last year and a half. I started getting ready for graduate school, and then life happened. Most personal projects like this got pushed by the wayside. Now that my PhD project is in progress, though, I can actually spare some time and give you all some of the smut you know and love.
I continue to be in awe of the response my work has gotten from this community. Almost 5,000 views, so many lovely reviews… who would’ve thought that I could’ve gotten this kind of following.
I seem to have inspired a spinoff as well – be sure to visit Ungudtime’s story, “Beach Week Revisited” at http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061027 . He will be covering events and encounters in the continuity of Beach Week, but not part of my actual story. We have been conferring back and forth both about his side-stories and this story, and he deserves a lot of the credit for kicking me into writing again. Check his work out; it does not disappoint.
As I get back into the writing groove, here is a brief interlude before I get back into the main arc of the story. Enjoy!

Chapter 8 – “Interlude: Wakeup Call”
M/F, incest
Tuesday, 10:33 AM

Ellen started down the stairs from the upper level of the beach house, leaving her six friends chattering about their plans for the day. She had been sent on a mission. A mission of the utmost importance. A mission without which plans carefully laid out whole minutes in advance could never proceed.
Her objective: wake up her lazy-ass brother.
Reaching the end of the hallway, Ellen pulled open the bedroom door and prepared to take a running leap at the bed – but froze just before taking off in her first stride. There on the bed her brother lay sprawled out spread-eagled on his back, one arm above his head and the other resting on his stomach. Just like herself, when he didn't have someone to actually cuddle and hold he would wander and spread out all over the place. What had stopped her though was the combination of the discarded pile of clothes by his side of the bed indicating that he hadn't worn a stitch overnight with Sarah and the unmistakable outline of his three-quarters-erect morning wood through the sheets that were pulled up to just below his belly button.
An evil grin game over Ellen's face and she quietly shut the door behind her.
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Elliot stirred, his mind slowly coming back together from the bits and pieces that had gone their separate ways overnight. At first, all he could feel was warmth. A warmth that completely filled his awareness: constant, soft and welcoming. A few more seconds and his senses came into focus. He could see diffuse morning sunlight making its way through his closed eyelids. Much more to the point though was a weight atop his legs, and the fact that the lovely warmth that had filled his being and pulled him from sleep had found a home in his groin where his dick was halfway buried in a mouth as inviting as any place it had known in recent days.
He smiled. He could get used to waking up like this.
The feelings continued, a hand softly coming to rest on his bare hip and a quiet slurping sound going along with the beginnings of a new rhythm. Elliot sighed, content with all the world as that warm wetness bobbed slowly up and down his length. The feelings spreading through his body from their contact brought him a shiver as he lifted his left hand from his stomach, running his fingers through the long hair just behind her ear. He felt her warm breath caress his moistened cock as she exhaled in a contained chuckle. He was in heaven.
A tongue slid around his dickhead, lips sealed just behind the ridge, forcing a gasp from his throat. His whole body was gently humming; even the feel of the bedspread against his back tickled softly. He breathed deep, shifting his shoulders against the cloth as his right arm this time rose and came to rest atop her head. It slid down the neck he found between his legs, across those strong, toned shoulder muscles, and came to rest on her coarse tank top strap -
...Wait, tank top? *Muscles*???
Elliot's eyes flew open, and he looked down his body to see a head of shoulder-length, slightly wild brown hair bobbing in his lap as his sister took half his length into her mouth on her latest downstroke, bending over his legs from where she had sat on the foot of the bed.
Elliot was no stranger to Ellen's oral attention. Coming as it did when he had been expecting someone else though, he was a bit less restrained than usual. Quickly jerking his knees towards his body had the end effect of wrapping Ellen up in the sheets that she had pulled down off his crotch, and his attempt to roll sideways just wound up pulling her legs up over the edge of the bed and flopping her over on her side, eyes wide as she pulled her face off his member to avoid choking. His sister wound up laying sideways with her shoulders between his thighs, thrashing her legs in the tangled sheets with his penis smooshed against her cheek.
"Ellen!" he hissed, scooting back a few inches. "Can't you just knock like a normal person?!"
“Can't you just sit back and enjoy a fricking blowjob?!” she retorted, wiping the saliva off her face as she worked at untangling herself from his knees.
“Not when it's suddenly... y'know!” He gestured vaguely in her direction.
Ellen's scowl softened in amusement, as she finally managed to right herself into a sitting position. “Never stopped you before.”
“Argh!” Elliot groaned in frustration. Shins at last free, he pulled them in and sat cross-legged, slightly self-conscious of his erection still pointing skyward. He buried his face in his hands, rubbing the sleep from his eyes. “...Where's Sarah, anyway?”
“Upstairs with the others. Said you were too cute to wake up. You're the last one asleep.” She lowered her voice conspiratorially and scooted closer to the head of the bed. “Though near as I can tell you really needed the rest.”
Elliot winced, opening his eyes again and continuing with a frown, oblivious. “Ellen, our girlfriends aren't sixty feet away, we shouldn't be-”
“Oh relax, will you? That was just a wakeup call. Worked, didn't it?”
He blushed, erection strong as ever. “Yeah, but-”
Ellen sidled up even closer. “And come on, after last night I don't quite see what you're so worried about.”
In that instant, it all came flooding back to Elliot's sleep-addled brain. Eyes wide, he remembered kissing a nude Sarah in the shower while his best friend and Grace were all over each other next to them. Finding the girls kissing in the bedroom. Making out with Grace... and then doing Grace while Tedd got it on with Sarah. Sliding into Grace from behind while she ate Sarah's pussy.
Ellen grinned as his blush went about six shades darker and his erection twitched, reaching new heights. “Thought so.”
“... … I... how did you...?”
“Sarah still can be pretty loud,” she replied simply, with a shrug. “Plus, she and Grace keep looking at Tedd and grinning at each other when they think nobody's looking.”
Elliot just buried his face in his hands again, out of exasperation as much as fatigue.
Ellen scooted up right in front of him, clapping her naked brother on the back. “Hey, c'mon, I'm congratulating you! You used to be such a goody two shoes. Didn't know you had it in you!”
He slowly looked back up at her face, dropping his hands to his sides. “...I didn't know Sarah had it in her,” he eventually replied, quietly.
“Really? Oh man, you are so going to tell me everything!” Ellen gushed, her anticipation clear.
“Oh I am? And what if I don't really want to talk about it with people who weren't there?”
“I'm gonna hear all about it one way or the other sooner or later, between you and Grace. But hmm... tell ya what...”
Ellen shifted her weight, pushing her legs sideways out from under her, and leaned forward. Before Elliot could react, she had grabbed the base of his cock in one hand and captured the head in her mouth again. “Gah! Ellen!” he protested weakly before gasping as her silky-smooth tongue slid down against his underside. Ellen bobbed her head forward, taking more than two thirds of his length into her mouth this time and holding it for just a second, that lovely warmth filling his cock again and begging his hips to push forward just that little bit more. Then she slowly slid her lips back up, tongue rolling back and forth exquisitely the whole way, until she was just kissing the tip. At last she released it, giving it the lightest of pecks before looking up to her brother's now slightly-vacant face as she scooted back, sliding down off the bed.
She licked her lips as she stood, tasting the precum that had built up during their conversation. “How's this for incentive? Tell me all about last night and you just might get the rest of that blowjob later.” She winked at her twin. “In the mean time, get some clothes on and c'mon upstairs! Everybody's waiting for you!”
Elliot just sat on the bed cross-legged and addled as Ellen whirled on her heels and quickly slid out the bedroom door. He could hear her receding footsteps, then her distant voice as she ascended the stairs and spoke with the rest of his friends, no doubt assuring them he was on his way. Eventually, his eyes moved from the closed door down to his very persistent, saliva-moistened erection.
“...Dammit.”
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