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Breaking in the Batgirls	By : SmutSenpai Category: DC Verse Comics > Batgirl Views: 281 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own Batgirl or the Batgirls or any DC properties. I make no money from writing this story.

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The girls were now each nine months pregnant and any one of them could go into labour any day now. Their due dates were all very close together and no one knew who would be the first to give birth.
With the help of the artifact Russel had arranged for a pair of midwives to assist with the births at home. They had been mind controlled so that they saw nothing odd about the fact that he was living with the three Batgirls of internet fame. To the midwives it was a perfectly normal family arrangement. Fake identities had been set up so there would be nothing untoward in any system. Everything was set and now they were all simply waiting, a palpable excitement in his three girls.
Right now Russel sat cross legged on the couch in the living room, his eyes half closed with the artifact in his lap. Cunt was the only other one in the room with him right now, sitting on the floor by his feet, her belly absolutely huge.
The blond girl shifted over to Russel and kissed his foot, looking up at him. It was hard for her to do anything these days being so heavy with child. She felt like she was in someone else’s body these days. For a while now she could actually see her baby kicking, little bumps pounding her stomach from the inside.
Her Daddy had been using the artifact a lot lately. Her curiosity got he best of her.
“What are you doing, Daddy?” She asked innocently.
Russel opened his eyes fully but did not move.
“Looking for a needle in a haystack.” He replied.
Cunt gave him a quizzical look. “A needle in a haystack?”
“Yes, sweetie. I’m trying to find Kryptonite.”
She gave him a puzzled look. It was a well known fact that Kryptonite was the rarest material on earth. It was also the one thing in the world that could kill Superman.
“Are you going to try to kill Superman?” She asked him, half joking.
“No, I don’t think that would be a good idea. Believe it or not but I think it’s good for this world to have a super powered boy scout looking after us all.”
“But then why would you need something like that, Daddy?”
Why indeed? Russel had been doing his own research on Kryptonian physiology. Most of the information he got from the ultra-secret encrypted files at LexCorp. It seemed that Lex Luthor was not who he publicly appeared to be and that he had quite the obsession with Superman.
“It doesn’t have to be lethal. Apparently a small enough quantity can have the effect of simply depowering a Kryptonian. That’s what I’m interested in.”
Cunt didn’t understand. “But why would you want to depower Superman?”
Russel gave her a look like a parent who’s child just wasn’t catching on.
“Who said anything about Superman?”
Then without moving he used the artifact. The TV turned on behind her and Cunt turned around to look at the screen.
There she was. Soaring high above the city like an angel out of some fabled myth. Clad in a tight blue shirt with a red skirt and boots, her long, golden hair waving behind her. That iconic symbol on her chest. One of the most powerful beings on the planet in the body of a pretty, dainty teenager. Supergirl.
Cunt turned around and gave her Daddy a shocked look. It all fell into place.
“Supergirl?”
“Yes. Supergirl.” Russel replied. With his three Batgirls giving birth any day now he knew that sex would dry up for a while. Not that he minded, but he figured it would be a good time to expand his harem.
“What do you say, Cunt? Would you like a new sister?”
Cunt stared at him in wonder, not saying anything. Then she turned back to the TV to watch the majesty of the floating girl on the screen. The super powered beauty from another world paused for a moment. She turned her head as though she heard something distant that required her attention. Then, faster than a speeding bullet, she rocketed away and was gone.

Author's note:

I never originally intended to write a novel with this one. As stated at the outset this story originally came about as a role play. When I started this whole thing my intention was simply to copy/paste a majority of the original, fixing up spelling and grammar here and there, adding a little detail and clarity and tightening up the work overall. It quickly became apparent to me that this approach wouldn’t work and that I was looking at a complete rewrite. It was the right choice in the end but it turned this into a much larger project than I first planned on.
Despite the rewrite there are passages of text taken from the original work, almost all of it from the early chapters. Most of Batgirls early dialogue is direct from my partners writing. Also the news segment that deals with the Batgirls initial exposure was also taken from my partner, although I had to edit, modify and add a little more to it. Other than this however the rewrite is entirely my own words.
It was a fun one to write. It’s often said ‘write for yourself’ and in this case that is what I did and this is the end result. That said I can’t help but look over it with a critical eye.
Obviously it’s an extremely self indulgent work. I guess an extended rape-fic of this length would have to be. You might also say it’s a bit uneven. Not all chapters are equal in quality, some seem a bit rushed to me and in need of a few more rounds of edits. Some scenes don’t have as much time spent or detail. Emphasis is on certain characters more than others. Most notably Cassandra doesn’t get as much time devoted to the breaking of her spirit. Most of the emphasis is on the other two Batgirls, Barbara in particular. Still I think it worked out in the end and I’m overall pleased with the result.
Another thing about this story is that it is long. That could be a good or a bad thing depending on how you look at it. There are plenty of stories out there written about Batgirl getting raped, but I don’t know if I’ve ever come across one with more words devoted to it than this one. In a lot of ways the story could be made better by being shorter and more concise. But I enjoyed the interplay between the characters and also wanted to make it comprehensive, thorough and believable.
The original role play ended after the orgy scene with all three Batgirls. I was very tempted to wrap it up there in the rewrite as well. In the end however I have too much respect for Barbara and having her break there still seemed a little too early to me. I felt it was necessary to give her one last act of heroism. Her attempting to use the artifact on her oppressor also seemed like a logical step she would have taken. Of course it doesn’t work out for her but adding that action and the resulting consequences definitely makes the story seem more complete to me.
I also thought about devoting some time to explaining how Russel would deal with other heroes, most notably the Justice League. After all if you go and hack the world’s communications networks and post an explicit series videos featuring Batgirl’s rape and unmasking, you’d figure that other superheroes would get involved. I even had a plausible way for him to deal with this, but there never seemed to be a good spot to include it. To me it would just slow down an already hefty story without necessarily adding all that much. Of course it would have been fun to include the reactions of some of Batgirls peers in the superhero community, but it’s not a Batman story and it’s not a Justice League story, it’s a Batgirls story. I leave it up to the reader to decide if this was for the best or not.
I also considered writing the actual birthing scenes, but again, that’s a lot of words that don’t add much to a story that already feels done. I think it’s better to leave things like that to the readers imagination, as well as the genders of the children and what happens to them all in the future.
Also, despite the subject matter, I really do like these characters. I did my best to stay true in writing them and by and large I think I was successful. If I didn’t just write over 100k words with them I’d be tempted to write another Batgirls story sometime. For now though I think it’s time to let them rest and move on to other projects.
Finally, if you’ve read this far all the way to the end, the author of this work would like to thank you. Special thanks to anyone who went to the trouble of leaving a comment. I had fun writing this and am humbled that you took the time to read it!
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