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Beach Week	By : seyunolu Category: Web Comics > El Goonish Shive Views: 15676 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 1
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Sorry for taking so long since the last chapter - school and vacation over spring break got in the way. Chapter 4 will be up very soon though - and after that one, we get to the Beach Week proper!

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Chapter 3 - "Brotherly Love"
M/F, Inc, Voy
Elliot gathered up his Anime-Style Martial Arts uniform from the closet and stuffed it in his bag. He preferred not going to 10 AM Saturday classes in favor of training on weeknights and Saturday evenings, but due to the upcoming beach trip he would be missing a week starting next Saturday. Sensei Greg insisted that he make up the total number of classes he would’ve taken during that week.

Ellen emerged from the bathroom and came back into their shared bedroom to grab her own bag. “Okay, we have 30 minutes to get there, get changed, and get stretched out. Let’s go!”

The twins went down the stairs of their house and bid farewell to their parents. The senior Dunkels looked up briefly from the dining room table to say goodbye, before returning their undivided attention to the catalog opened between them. Elliot and Ellen had long since learned not to interrupt them when they were deep into contemplating one of their incredibly mundane plots, lest the two of them get sucked in.

The two of them climbed into their car, Ellen in the driver’s seat, and set out for the dojo. “So,” Elliot reported, “After you went to bed last night I got an email from Sarah with the directions to the beach house. It’s an 8 hour drive.”

“…Eww. Well, I ain’t driving that.”

“Well, Neither am I.”

“Well, tough.”

They went back and forth like that for a minute or two, before settling on each of them driving one leg of the trip. “This beach house had BETTER be worth it,” Ellen opined.

“Well, Sarah says her family stayed in that exact one two years ago. It’s apparently only a few hundred feet from the beach, too, and has an 8 person hot tub.”

“Well at least that sounds cool.” Ellen paused. “You had a chance to talk about Grace’s plans?”

“I told her Grace was pulling for the inside of the house being clothing-optional. She said she pretty much expected that what with Grace coming along. I also told her there was a good chance of some risqué business in the evenings. She said she also expected that given the three couples and everything. And I said no, probably not just in the bedrooms… so I tried to explain what you two were suggesting. In the end she said as long as she and I didn’t have to join in if we didn’t want to, it’d be okay.”

“Just like that?” Ellen asked.

“Well no. That was a quick summary. She was confused for a little while. And she’s apprehensive of the possibility of having sex in front of other people. Knowing her lately, I'm pretty sure it's secretly turning her on, but it's still a bit out of the blue."

“Well like she said she doesn’t have to if she doesn’t want to. But she’d be missing out.”

Elliot laughed, slightly self-consciously. Ellen had, of course, told him all the sordid details of her and Grace’s newfound sexual relationship over the past 3 months. The two of them had been having a great time with no signs that it had changed their friendship in any way except possibly deepening it. And, of course, there was the twins’ own, longer-running affair… pulling into the dojo parking lot, he refocused his thoughts on the hour ahead.

The two of them ran inside with 10 minutes to class. Rushing to the dressing rooms, they managed to avoid line of sight with Sensei Greg’s office, where he was too busy contemplating how to one-up his latest archrival, Jim Carey, to notice a few measly students.

The two of them emerged within seconds of each other and walked barefoot out onto the matted floor, wearing nearly identical black uniforms. Ellen had, for the longest time, resisted enrolling in Greg’s school, for the obvious reason of keeping an identity and set of activities separate from those of Elliot. She gave that up when she realized she was practicing in the basement just as much as Elliot was in class anyway. Greg had taken their “long lost siblings” cover story and spun a few additions onto it, including a hefty dose of “lost twins” mystical mumbo-jumbo to explain their nearly identical fighting styles (down to the Tamashi Gekido) to the other students. As such, the other students just stayed out of their way as they made their way to the bars to stretch.

Sensei Greg eventually emerged from his office, frustrated once again at his inability to successfully conjure up a glittery transformation sequence. Coming back to reality, he took stock of the students trickling in. A few novices congregating by the trophy case, a good number of brown and red belts scattered about… and across the room, the pair of black-clad brown-haired students stretching each other out. With Nanase not available on weekends and Justin (now rising in the ranks of the school rapidly) not present, Ellen and Elliot were the senior students and would help run the class. He tended to not pair them up for sparring though – their fighting styles were similar enough that it was less interesting than mixing it up with the others, as good as the two of them might be.

“Alright, everybody, line up!” Greg called out. He had a hell of a lesson plan in store.

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Two hours later, the Dunkels walked slowly back to their car. Greg had made sure they got their money’s worth with that class. After it was done, the two of them had stayed late alone with Greg for another forty minutes. Once Greg had gotten wind of their awakenings and ability to use magic, he had offered to give them private lessons in the potential combat uses of their unique skills. He was beside himself with envy of some of Ellen’s later beam-based spells, and Elliot’s powers and newer painless catboy (or catgirl) morph was certainly nothing to sneeze at either.

After all that training and morphing, though, the two of them were pooped and just wanted to get home. Elliot drove, their conversation inevitably turning towards the upcoming beach trip again, as they discussed what they should bring along.

As they arrived home, they noticed the other car was not in the driveway. “Dad must be out on some kind of errand,” Ellen observed. As they entered the house through the garage door they noted the lack of any sort of smell of their mother’s cooking - highly unusual for Saturday. Elliot called out “Mom, Dad, we’re home!” He paused for a few seconds, receiving no answer. Ellen, entering the kitchen, found the reason. Next to the seemingly perpetually present plate of fresh cookies was a note. It read:

“Ellen and Elliot – we have gone out to capture a new car to replace the one you’re taking to school. We have seven cars picked out online and five dealerships to visit. New used Prius came in at one of them, have to test drive it today before its taken. May be gone a while. 80% chance we return with a new car! There’s egg salad in the fridge, make some sandwiches. Love you and see you for dinner!

- Mom & Dad”

“I should’ve known something was up when they were printing all those papers last night,” Elliot said after Ellen handed the note to him.

“Yeah, Mom and Dad and the Internet are a dangerous mix,” Ellen agreed. “On the upside, it looks like we’re actually getting the old car for college!”

“Pretty sweet, huh?” Elliot grinned as he spoke. “The question is, which one of us?”

“Both of us, silly!” Ellen retorted. Elliot raised an eyebrow. Ellen continued. “We’re both going to the same college, almost everything is within walking distance there, and we haven’t had any problems sharing it so far. I think we can manage.”

“Yeah, you’re right. Though you’ve been taking Nanase out with it a lot more than I’ve been using it lately.”

Ellen replied as she reached into the fridge to grab the components of their lunch, Elliot following suit and getting some cups for drinks. “That’s just because its kinda awkward spending lots of time at her house, and Tedd or Sarah are always over here. We need some alone time, if you know what I'm saying. In the fall, with me and Grace rooming and Nanase in that suite with the private bedroom, we’ll be spending a lot more nights in,” she said with her typical smirk.

“Good point,” he conceded, laying out some plates on the kitchen table.

“You and Sarah might want to think about spending time out more often though. With you and Tedd rooming, I’m still not sure I’d put it past him to install a spy camera or tape recorder or something. And if the two of you spend too much time alone together the whole dorm is liable to know about it.”

Elliot rolled his eyes, as the two of them sat down and started putting sandwiches together. Ellen just COULDN’T let that incident go. “Tedd’s a lot better adjusted now that he has Grace, and you know it. And come on, sis, she’s gotten a lot better about being quiet lately.”

“Remember the big camping trip?”

“Come on…”

“When we all woke up to those rhythmic squeals coming from your tent?”

“Just drop it already, alright?”

“And spring break this last year when Mom knocked on your door because she heard ‘distressed moans’? And the condoms and note that wound up under your pillow the next day?”

“Sis…”

“And what about the time I heard a distinctly feline yowling coming from upstairs a few minutes before you two came down?”

Elliot threw up his hands, surrendering. “Okay, okay, you win! Sheesh, just drop it, okay?”

Ellen finally let it slide, her desire to tease her brother temporarily satiated. The uniformed twins ate their sandwiches at the kitchen table, their conversation roaming from Sensei Greg's lesson plans, to how hard it was for them to get new spells lately after their initial burst of innovation (though Nanase warned them about that), to what classes they were looking forward to in the fall, to how likely Justin was to bring the Doctor Who DVDs he was so crazy about lately to the beach house. Soon enough, the two of them were done. Ellen grabbed their dishes and took them to the sink while Elliot wiped down the table.

Ellen revisited their previous conversation. “You know I was just teasing you about Sarah. You oughta be proud! You make her really happy and she can’t get enough of your loving. You two will probably have a great time at the beach house.”

Blushing slightly, Elliot decided to fight back. “Probably. You and Nanners had better keep your spellcasting quiet though.”

“Huh?”

“Oh, you know what I’m talking about. Her clothes-switch spell is the one that makes that big noisy burst of wind, right?” Elliot said, tossing the wet paper towel he had been using.

“…Only when she’s not focusing hard…” Ellen protested.

“Well then I guess you make her lose focus. I *can’t* imagine how,” Elliot joked.

Finishing her own cleanup, Ellen turned to face her twin. “Oh, I think you know perfectly well how I do that.”

Elliot noted a new edge in his sister’s voice at this latest comment. “Oh do I now? Would this somehow involve a lack of clothes and lots of tongue?” he replied.

“Mmmm… not just tongue,” Ellen replied, eyes far away for a moment as she no doubt recalled the last time she stayed over Nanase’s house when her parents weren’t home.

Elliot grinned. “It’s been a little while since you were last able to ‘distract’ each other… are you two going to be able to see each other before we go on the beach trip?”

“I don’t know. I don’t think so. She is *so* busy this summer… I’ve been having to make do with Grace. Not that Grace isn’t fun, but it just isn’t the same, you know? I miss her,” Ellen replied with a bit of a faraway look in her eyes.

“Yeah. Nothing wrong with a little fun in the mean time though, right?” he replied.

“Nope, nothing at all.” Ellen’s eyes returned to her brother. “Speaking of fun… you thinking what I’m thinking?”

Elliot’s mind raced. He had a pretty good idea, but he decided to play dumb. “What would that be?”

“Oh, come on dummy… neither one of us has seen our girlfriends in a week, the parents are out for hours, we have the house for ourselves, we were about to shower after class… surely you can’t think of a better setup than THAT?”

Elliot grinned back at her, his face practically a mirror image of hers. “Yeah, you’re right.”

Ellen sniffed herself. “I definitely need that shower first. Your bed, 15 minutes!”

The twins ran up to their bedroom, grabbed their towels and bathrobes from the closet and drawer, and split up to wash themselves. Elliot left his sister to the hall bathroom, taking the shower attached to his parents’ bedroom for himself. After setting the temperature of the water a little colder than normal, so as to not have the heat run out with the two of them showering, he stripped off his uniform and stepped out of his boxers, into the warm spray. And in anticipation of what was coming up, his dick had already started to rise.

As he started lathering up, taking a moment to stroke a soapy hand across his swelling erection, Elliot reflected on the bizarre circumstances that had brought him to this point.

By their very nature, Elliot and Ellen’s relationship was only partially like that of a pair of siblings. They shared 17 years worth of memories, could read each other like books, looked just like each other (even more so when Elliot was transformed with one of his genderswap spells), and were essentially unable to keep secrets from each other. There was no thought that one had that the other one did not know about eventually, usually rather quickly.

Ellen had had a hard first few months as she struggled to make an identity for herself as someone other than an unexpected photocopy of Elliot. Her second life memories had certainly helped, as had her budding relationship with Nanase. Getting together with someone she had had a good friendship (and casual relationship) with in her male memories, but in a much closer and more emotionally intimate way, had gone a long way to showing her that people appreciated her as someone new. Elliot had done what he could to help her acclimation along, treating her as he would’ve treated a natural born sister – refusing to dispense with modesty around her, providing what advice he could when she and Nanase had their inevitable first few spats, avoiding those topics that a brother and sister just *didn't* talk about – but this internal charade of siblings had broken down after only a few months.

The final straw had actually come when he walked into their shared room one evening to find Ellen naked on her bed, masturbating furiously. He'd blurted "Sorry," and turned to go, mentally kicking himself. She shared all of his memories and habits; for years before her “birth” he had rubbed one out in his room right before going to sleep every night. In the months since her creation he had had a hard time finding times and places at home besides the bathroom to relieve himself, and he realized that things must’ve been even harder for her. The incident had sparked a long, candid talk between them in which they realized an assumption they'd been operating under, that they shouldn't discuss their sexual thoughts with each other, had been causing them to artificially avoid each other in circumstances that, given their nature as duplicates, they really shouldn’t be uncomfortable around each other in. They were, no matter what their current status, incredibly tightly linked and there was no reason for them to try to act like a natural set of siblings. From that day forward, modesty around each other had completely disappeared and the two of them had, separately but definitely listening to each other, gotten themselves off in bed every night. Sarah and Nanase had immediately found out and been a little weirded out at first by the idea of the pseudo-siblings being that open with each other, but they eventually realized that it was harmless and that they would probably do the same thing under those circumstances.

Sarah had taken a bit of interest their arrangements – she had known Elliot since he was little, and cared deeply about Ellen, knowing what a weird circumstance she must be in. She'd started just asking how Ellen was coping with her rather unique situation, effectively suddenly switching gender and with Elliot always there as a reminder of what she 'used to' be, but as he and Sarah had gotten more and more sexual with each other her questions had gotten more and more… interesting. She had started joking about the two of them getting each other off only counting as masturbation, and started honestly asking if they had ever thought of doing anything more sexual with each other. He was pretty sure that she was actually kind of turned on by the idea - a bit of a surprise for him, but not terribly so, given how she'd responded to his painless catboy spell when he got it.

At the same time, Ellen had some pretty similar ideas enter her mind – Elliot was pretty sure it had something to do with Nanase getting her magic back and starting to use her "Fox" clone spell in the bedroom. Finally, one night about 3/4 of a year earlier it just… happened. The two of them had been masturbating before bed, and it went from under the covers, to on top of the blankets, to watching each other, to sitting next to each other, to helping each other, to Elliot suddenly mounting his sister and pumping a load into her as they came together (thank GOD for their paranoid parents, putting Ellen on birth control her first month of existence, “just in case”). The two of them had freaked out and confessed to their girlfriends immediately… but much to their surprise neither Nanase nor Sarah seemed particularly shocked. Both had understood how it could happen for people in their unique circumstance, and had half expected something like it to happen for months. Resigned, they told the twins they could enjoy themselves on their own… and Sarah at least seemed to not only not mind terribly much (at least most of the time; sometimes he thought he caught a hint of annoyance), but to think it was kind of hot, and teased him about it mercilessly.

He snapped himself out of his reverie. His washing concluded and his tired muscles relaxed, he allowed himself one more idle stroke of his member, turned off the shower and dried himself off. Feeling a good deal more loose, he slipped his blue bathrobe on (his now partially tumescent cock making a noticeable tent in the front) and returned to the bedroom. There he found Ellen already done, reclining on his bed, browsing the newer entries in his spell book. She was wearing her own bathrobe, as was the habit of the both of them after showering, but her sash was undone and the front of the robe very carefully laid open from her collarbone, down between her breasts and over her toned stomach, past her belly button and culminating in exposing a narrow strip of brown, curly pubic hair.

Ellen looked up and grinned. Laying the magic item aside on his nightstand, she spoke up. “I said fifteen minutes. That was at least twenty!”

His dick hardened as he played along. “Hey, it was one of Greg’s crazy workout days. I needed a little extra time under the warm water. And you wouldn’t want me to be all dirty now, would you?”

Ellen’s eyes twinkled. She sat up and swung her legs over the edge of his bed, her robe falling open to expose her pussy and the entirety of one large breast. “Bro, I *expect* you to be dirty right now.”

Elliot grinned and walked over to the edge of the bed, where Ellen stood up. They needed no speech to know exactly what to do. As he reached into her robe and ran his hand over his hips – in his opinion, one of the sexiest parts of a woman – she undid his robe and unceremoniously pushed it off his shoulders, leaving him standing nude in front of her, his dick at attention. “Mmm, nice one,” she said as she took one hand and wrapped it around his erection, feeling that familiar warmth and hardness she knew just how to pleasure from their shared memories.

The two of them stepped closer, Elliot cupping Ellen’s left breast as he reached around her right side to feel her ass. The two of them seldom went through much foreplay, Ellen’s sex drive being as intense as any guy’s and the two of them getting horny at similar times, but a little feeling up before the main event was always fun. They seldom kissed though – in the heat of the moment it did sometimes happen, but for the most part their sex was more physical and less emotionally intimate, as they already shared so much in their day to day life... and too much kissing would just be weird.

This rapid buildup was evident as Ellen began lightly stroking Elliot’s shaft, not gripping hard enough that his skin slid with her strokes but instead lightly running her hand over his prick, while Elliot took past advice from her and paid plenty of attention to her breasts. A quirk of the way Tedd had programmed V5 had left her boobs extremely excitable erogenous zones – he remembered her telling about one of the first times she and Nanase reached second base when she almost came from tit-groping alone. He kept fondling her as the twins buried their heads in the crooks of each others’ necks, feeling the other breathing and gasping, occasionally muttering encouragement.

By mutual silent agreement, the two of them moved over to the edge of their bed and sat side by side. Ellen flipped her long, still damp hair out of her eyes as she increased the squeeze she was putting on her brother’s cock. Elliot himself leaned over and took his tongue to Ellen’s ample breasts, circling a nipple with his tongue and just grazing it with his teeth exactly how Sarah had taught him on her own smaller (but incredibly beautiful) specimens. Ellen shuddered and her head fell back. He could feel from her grip on his dick that that had really gotten to her. As he continued, Ellen took her hand out of the standard “fist” position on his cock and went to stroking the sensitive underside gently with two fingertips, and it was Elliot’s turn to gasp as he sucked her nipple into his mouth, his hands roaming all over her body.

Elliot noticed his sister’s legs starting to drift apart. He decided he would give her a treat, and stood up, breaking his contact with her breasts and hers with his dick. Moving in front of her, he kneeled down and started gently pushing her knees apart, the better to go down on her. But once she had come to her senses, she immediately forced her legs back together.

“Uh uh,” she said. “I get plenty of that with Nanase and Grace - but I NEVER get cock.” She slid up further onto his bed, and laid herself out along its length, losing the robe entirely, her eyes settling on his prick. “No, bro, what I need right now is a good hard screwing. You wouldn’t be able to provide that, would you?”

“You know, I just might!” Both twins grinning, Elliot climbed up on his bed, while Ellen spread her legs. He climbed between them and leaned down over her body. His lips came to just above her navel, and he proceeded to kiss her stomach, and slowly started crawling his way up her body. He could feel hiding under her womanly curves strong muscles that were now tense in anticipation.

Giggling a little as her belly was tickled by his lips, Ellen squirmed as his arms went to either side of her torso and his mouth reached her cleavage. There he paused for a minute, nuzzling her pink, erect nipples with his nose and lips while her hands rubbed up and down his muscular back, unable to keep her legs still.

As he moved up a final time, his mouth coming to her collarbone and giving it a suck that made her gasp, Elliot’s rock hard cock at last touched Ellen’s warm and damp cunt. Placing his hands on either side of her body and raising his chest over hers at an angle, he ground his shaft against her slit and felt her hips rise, grinding back against him. The two of them instantly found a rhythm, Ellen thrusting her hips in time with Elliot, sliding her slit against him. The two of them began breathing heavily, their eyes on each other's faces, reading the few signs off each other they couldn’t feel by touch.

Soon enough, though, it was time for the main event. Again by silent agreement, Elliot shifted backwards a bit and Ellen lifted her legs further, opening her pussy to his inspection. Balancing on his knees and one arm, Elliot reached back and grabbed his erection. He guided the tip into Ellen’s slit, and pushed it downwards until he felt the telltale lack of resistance… and slid his hips forwards, pushing his throbbing erection inside his twin’s familiar pussy.

Ellen reached up and grabbed Elliot’s shoulders as his arms made their way back alongside her body, closing her eyes and arching her back for a moment as her face formed something between a smile and a grimace of pleasure. “Uhnnnnn…” she moaned as he sank his entire length into her in his second long, slow stroke, as he closed his eyes in appreciation of the warm, tight sensation of his bare cock inside her. He could feel her cunt muscles squeezing against his sudden intrusion, and lay there fully enveloped for a few moments as her muscles relaxed. Once they had, he pulled back an inch or two and thrust back in, drawing a gasp from her mouth and causing her head to loll back again. Another quirk of V5 was in effect – having been designed by a horny 14 year old Tedd, V5 gave someone hit by it a pussy that was very nearly as sensitive to penetration as most women were to clitoral stimulation.

The twins found their usual rhythm as Elliot started sliding his cock in and out of her. They started slow – they knew they had plenty of time before their parents would be back and wanted to enjoy themselves.

Their ab muscles worked as both of them thrust their hips into each other, breathing hard, and looking into each other’s faces. “Oh, FUCK…” Ellen moaned, scrunching her eyes in pleasure as Elliot bottomed out particularly deep and ground his pubic bone into her clit. No instructions were exchanged; they needed none. One of Ellen’s hands found his, and they gripped each other lightly as they fucked – through the feel of each other's fingers, the hardness of his cock, the slickness and contractions of her pussy, and the sound of each other's breathing they could tell exactly what worked, what didn’t, what the other needed.

Their pace increased, Elliot’s cock hardening even further as it worked its magic inside Ellen. Their hands tightening around each other, Elliot lowered his upper body slightly to once again nibble at her collarbones and neck as she returned the favor as best she could from her angle. Soon she had lifted her legs entirely off the bed and wrapped them about Elliot's hips, the better to spread open for him and pull his cock into her.

Their pace increased to frenzied levels, the bed creaking at a volume they would have never allowed if their parents had been home. Elliot pounded into his sister, much harder than Sarah usually enjoyed but just right for what Ellen needed that day. Both twins started gasping for breath as the urgency of their thrusts reached new heights and their hands squeezed ever tighter. Elliot felt a stirring deep inside him… and could tell that Ellen was getting close too. He tore his lips away from her neck, raised up higher to see her face as he kept fucking her. She opened her eyes and stared into his face, mouth open and breath coming fast.

Their eyes locked, their climaxes fast approaching… and then Ellen's visage faded out of focus as the twins came together, coordinated by their exquisite feel for each other’s bodies. Elliot groaned out loud, low and long, as Ellen moaned and arched her back, her hands flying to Elliot’s back and squeezing him hard. His body spasmed as his cock began spurting cum deep into his duplicate, and he felt her pussy clench and unclench around him. He tried to keep thrusting through their combined orgasm, their eyes staying on each other's faces even as they both lost clear vision, but he found himself with his cock rammed as deep into her as it could possibly go, pumping cum as she thrust her hips up at his member and held him inside her with her legs, trying to take him even deeper. There they stayed until their ecstasies ran their course, and they found themselves lying entwined, once again covered in sweat, Ellen's heels slowly moving down Elliot's thighs as she released him, accompanied by chills and aftershocks from their deep orgasms.

Elliot eventually rolled off his sister, his softening cock sliding out of her wet canal, coated in a mixture of her juices and his cum. Ellen reached down to slide two fingers into her cunt for a moment, and brought them up to her mouth. “Mmmm,” she said breathlessly, sucking on them for a moment. “We taste good.” Elliot smiled, lying on his side facing her. He reached over to grab her hand, and brought it and some of the mixture to his lips. He hadn’t liked the taste of his own cum before he began making love with Sarah, but her fondness for being eaten out after being fucked had cured him of any aversion to the taste.

Swallowing the mixture, Elliot took in the sight of their sweaty bodies. “I think we’re going to need another shower after that."

“You can say that again,” Ellen said, her trademark grin returning.

Tired but still a bit excited, the Dunkel twins shakily got to their feet, gathered some casual clothes and towels, and left their bedroom for the bathroom down the hall, pausing for a moment as Ellen briefly and playfully grabbed her brother's ass as he walked in front of her.

And as the door closed behind them, a tiny redheaded fairy on Ellen's shelf quietly pulled her damp hand out from inside her skirt and reverted to a plastic doll…
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