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Chapter Two: Spur of the Moment

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Three Weeks Ago…

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“I wonder if Reese Witherspoon is as pretty in person.”

Elliot looked away from the cute blonde on the television and down at the even cuter blonde wrapped up in his arms as they lay stretched out on her living room couch, abandoned textbooks and notepads spread out on the coffee table in front of them. “I wouldn’t think so. You know how Hollywood dresses everything up.”

Sarah shrugged at that. “Yeah, but some people are just naturally gorgeous. I totally wouldn’t be surprised if she was one of them. Even if she does get made up a lot on-screen, I bet she’s still really cute on her own.”

Elliot’s teasing smile broke free. “Why Sarah, is that a celebrity girl-crush you’re admitting to?”

His girlfriend immediately flushed, but she began giggling too, always a good sign. “Nooooo, you big dork, I just think she’s pretty. I’d love to be that good-looking.”

“What, you mean you want to be less beautiful than you already are?” Elliot responded without missing a beat.

Her blush – and her smile – grew brighter. “Oh c’mon, quit teasing…”

“I’m not. You’re totally cuter than her. You don’t need Hollywood magic to look amazing.”

“Okay, NOW you’re just fishing for a kiss,” Sarah countered with a teasing smirk of her own.

“Drat, you’ve found me out. You’re right, that was a total lie, I just wanted to make out.”

“Hehe, you bad boy…” Sarah giggled, twisting herself around in his arms, lying on top of him chest to chest now instead of back to chest.

Elliot smiled a bit as he looked up into her eyes, idly stroking her back with both hands. She really was beautiful, he thought. Sometimes she didn’t think so, he knew, and so he was always quick to remind her however he could. And usually, especially times like now, judging from the look in her eyes, she was ready and eager to believe him.

Her adorable giggle filled his ears again. “What? What’re you staring at?”

“The prettiest girl in the world. Why, what’re YOU staring at?”

Sarah nearly snorted with laughter. “Oh my god you are SO cheesy!”

“But honest,” Elliot insisted.

“I know…if only cuz you’re a terrible liar,” she said with another teasing laugh.

Elliot chuckled and heaved a content sigh, glancing over at the table. “Mmm…y’know, we really should be trying to get some headway on that homework pile…”

“That’s a boring idea,” Sarah countered, and promptly slipped her arms under his shoulders, hugging him and laying her head against the top of his chest. “I wanna do something else.”

“Hmm, whatever could that be…?” Elliot teasingly pondered aloud, rubbing her back with a little more intent and purpose. “Maybe we could lay here and cuddle?”

“However did you guess?” Sarah agreed with a breathy giggle.

“Could be because you always get huggy and cuddly when we watch sappy movies.”

“Can you blame me? They’re romantic, they put me in a sappy mood too…”

“Hey, I’m not complaining. Beautiful girl that I love, snuggled in my lap? I’ll take it.”

Sarah lifted her head a bit at that, looking right into his eyes, her cheeks crimson and her smile wide. “It still gives me shivers when you say that…”

Elliot gave a curious tilt of his head. “Say what?”

“…that you love me.”

Elliot was almost ready to make another silly joke, but stopped short when he noticed Sarah’s demeanor had changed suddenly. She wasn’t in playful teasing mode anymore. She’d definitely shifted into full-on romance mode.

Elliot changed tack accordingly, bringing his hands off her back and up to cup her cheeks with the gentlest of touches. “Well, then…” he leaned closer, lightly pecking her lips, and very intentionally murmured in her ear. “I love you…”

This time Elliot could literally feel the shiver go down her spine, and as he moved back to look at her eyes again, a quick and breathy “I love you, too” was all he had time to register before she closed in again and their lips met properly in what was easily the deepest and most intense kiss they’d shared yet. Boy, he marveled, he must have really hit the right nerve.

Elliot was all too happy to return it, bringing one hand around the back of her head to hold her close while the other again moved down to circle her back, their legs and hips squirming a bit for comfortable position together on the slightly cramped couch. It was especially difficult for Elliot; his gorgeous girlfriend laying all over him and just about making out with him was enough to get any male his age uncomfortably aroused, and the last thing he wanted to do was let on about it to Sarah and ruin the romantic mood. But as they squirmed around for a good position to settle in, her thigh inevitably pushed right between his legs, and there was absolutely no way she didn’t feel the hard bulge in the front of his pants.

He felt Sarah jolt a bit in surprise, breaking the kiss for a moment to stare into his eyes with a deep blush, and Elliot’s embarrassed blush rapidly appeared to match, a long, awkward pause hovering between them until Elliot spoke. “…S-sorry…I-I, um…”

And at that moment Elliot’s whole night took a sharp detour, as Sarah leaned back down, resumed their kiss…and quite purposely began to rub her thigh up and down against his trapped erection.

Elliot’s groan of surprise was immediate and intense, and he was thankful most of it was muffled by her lips occupying his; her parents were most certainly home, and this wasn’t a sight they’d be happy to see. Nevertheless his hands slowly started to roam a little more, pushing her shirt up in the back almost past her bra strap, then stroking all the way down over her hips and even tentatively grazing her butt. A soft squeak escaped her throat as he did so, but it certainly wasn’t resistance – if anything she kissed him even harder – and his hands began to roam her back and butt without restraint.

When they finally broke the kiss and came up for air they were both panting for breath and staring at each other with hungry eyes. He could tell what she wanted, and God help him if he didn’t want it too.

“Sarah…I really…really wanna…”

Sarah nodded in rapid agreement. “Me too…but my parents…”

“Nnhh…I know…”

It was an admission that should have ended the moment right then and there. And though it would have left him more than a little frustrated, he would have accepted it. But then…

“…Not here. My room.”

Elliot froze for a moment, breathless, hardly believing her boldness, but love and desire soon overwhelmed that, and he nodded his understanding. Not even waiting for her to disentangle herself completely from his body, he instead pulled her into his arms as they stood up, planted his hands firmly on her butt-cheeks, and hoisted her clear off the ground. He almost chuckled as her eyes bulged in surprised arousal and she had to bite her lip to keep from moaning aloud; she was so incredibly adorable. For a second after that she looked at him like he was crazy, but it vanished just as quick as it had appeared and they were already kissing again, her arms hooked around his neck and starting to pull up the back of his shirt.

The next few minutes were like a blur to Elliot. He didn’t even remember actually getting to her room. All he remembered was laying her down in bed and kissing her with all the passion he could muster as they both frantically stripped each other of every article of clothing they possessed in about the least romantic fashion possible. There was the briefest of pauses as Elliot yanked Sarah’s shirt off and his hand came to rest over one of the cups of her bra, but the desire to get even further under her clothes kept the pause from being any longer than a small instant, and the stripping continued anew. The kiss broke again as they at last leaned back and took a few moments to simply gawk at each other’s naked bodies for the first time. Elliot could tell Sarah was paying special attention to his broad chest, and had probably taken a long, hungry look at his painfully hard shaft, but his attention was of course elsewhere, moving slowly down from her face to her bare chest. Her breasts were much more modest than, say, Nanase’s, but that wasn’t a sleight against Sarah; truth be told he actually preferred smaller breasts, and Sarah’s were just about perfect. They looked like they’d fit just perfectly in his palm, gently curved and pointed at the small, soft pink tips of her nipples. From there his eyes roamed down, over her stomach that she rarely bared, even to him, and down between her slightly-parted legs, and Elliot shivered himself at the sight of her neat blonde curls and the little slit of pink flesh beneath it.

At last their eyes met again, and they hastened to share another needy kiss, but Elliot wasn’t content to just kiss her lips now. He quickly slid down her body, trailing kisses along her cheek and neck and shoulders on his way down, and settled around her chest, gently cupping and kissing her breasts for the first time. He felt her body quivering in response, and for a moment he wondered if perhaps he was moving too fast as he looked up at her nervous expression. But despite the look, she hurriedly urged him to continue, and he hurried to do so, eliciting soft moans that she had to muffle with her pillow as his fingers and tongue stroked her curves and flicked her nipples.

When he felt her breasts were sufficiently stimulated, he finally moved lower, trailing just a few quick kisses over her stomach before gently parting her legs and feeling a jolt of his own nervousness as he gawked again at her slit. The last time he’d been to this stage with a girl was with Nanase, and trying to satisfy her had been a spectacular failure. In hindsight the reason for that was obvious, but at the time, when neither of them had really known she was gay, it had been more than a little emasculating to be so apparently inept, and even now he wasn’t exactly confident in his skills. But if the surprisingly moist look of her opening was any clue, Sarah was ready and waiting, and he couldn’t leave her hanging because he was unsure of himself. He had to go for it. He looked up at Sarah’s face to give her a quick, loving smile, then dipped back down and went to work.

With shaking fingers he reached forward, and brushed his first two fingers over her slit, up and down in a slow line. He glanced up toward her face to gauge her reactions, but it was almost unnecessary; her face was hidden by the pillow that she was softly moaning into, and instead it was the tremble in her hips that told him how pleasurable it already felt. So far so good, he thought. His fingers moved a little faster, probing very gently inside her slit and spreading it open a little, and his breath caught in his throat as he realized just how wet she already was, something that seemed almost impossible to him. His fingers were already getting a coat of juice around them, and it was effortless to slide them in and out of her too. He’d barely touched her so far and she was already more stimulated than he’d ever gotten Nanase to be. That was very encouraging.

Spurred by his success, he quickly grew more bold, bringing his face closer and giving her an exploratory lick of his tongue, past her spread lips and over her exposed pink insides. The tangy flavor of her plentiful juices reached his taste buds immediately, enticing him deeper, and deeper was exactly where he went. The full length of his tongue was soon swirling around her inner walls, and it was only a couple of minutes before Sarah’s moans grew too strong for her pillow to muffle, and her cute sighs and squeaks of pleasure began to reach his ears.

“Mmnnaah…Elliot…oh, fuck, Elliot…”

“I-Is this okay…?” Elliot breathed back, withdrawing momentarily from her slit.

“Oh god, WAY more than okay please don’t stop…” she hissed, gently but urgently.

“R-right, right…!” Elliot stammered and dove back in, his fingers rejoining his tongue in stimulating her. “Mmhh…just…tell me whatever you want me to do…”

Sarah’s whole body was lightly squirming by now, her breathy moans growing more audible. “Hnnhh…jesus…Elliot…how are you so good at that…?”

“Heh…practice…?”

“Guhhh…j-jeez…E-Elliot…”

Sarah was moaning louder than ever, and higher-pitched too, but as he looked at her face, he saw she was suddenly flushing deeper, differently now, almost like she was…embarrassed? That was odd, Elliot thought, what would she be embarrassed about now?

“You okay…?” he whispered.

“N-nnhhh…I-I…I’m okay…E-Elliot…m-maybe you should slow down, I…I’m really…really close…”

“Heh…isn’t that a good thing…?” Elliot murmured with a goofy grin. His excited efforts began gaining speed rather than slowing, his fingers coming out soaked now when they thrust their way into her while his tongue curled upward and finally found the magic button of her clit.

“B-buh….but…A-ahh…! Ahh…!! Mmmnnyyaahhhh!!!”

Sarah’s moans suddenly morphed into high-pitched squeaks, and Elliot felt her whole body both tense up and shiver uncontrollably. That was it, he thought with an extremely pleased grin; he’d done it. He’d hardly needed ten minutes, and he’d totally made her cum. He could hardy believe it, he’d just made a girl cum.

And then he felt the rush of juices, the taste of Sarah’s sex splash his hand and drench the sheets and flood his mouth a little with sweet, orgasmic flavor, and Elliot’s jaw nearly dropped out of his skull. That wasn’t just some small spike. He didn’t exactly know everything there was to know about female pleasure, but something he did know was that little orgasms didn’t make a girl’s chest heave as she gasped desperately for air. Little orgasms didn’t make their whole bodies spasm or make a miniature torrent of juices hit him in the face. She didn’t ‘just’ cum right then. She came hard.

Good lord that was hot.

“Hnnnhh…oh God…oh my God, Elliot, I’m so sorry…” Sarah whispered through deep breaths, her face flushed more horribly than ever, like she was borderline-humiliated. “I-I couldn’t…couldn’t c-control…it’s been a problem for months, I tried to warn…god, please don’t freak--”

“Sarah?”

“…y-yeah…?”

“That…was the hottest thing I’ve ever seen.”

“…Wh--…what?”

“I had no idea…a girl could get that…wet…I’m totally soaked…”

Her flushed face got redder with shock and surprise. “A-and you…you’re not freaked out…?”

“No way…”

Elliot crawled back up her body, unperturbed by the sudden tension all over her body, and before she could express any more surprise or protest he was kissing her again, his voice hissing against her lips with all the passion and lust he had.

“I love you so much, Sarah…and God, I want you so bad…”

It was like a switch had flipped. The tension that was flooding her mere moments ago vanished almost completely, like the knowledge that she was desired was wiping away whatever embarrassment or insecurity about her ‘problem’ had gripped her.

“You want me…?”

“So much…”

A coy grin crossed her face. “Then take me…”

Elliot didn’t need to be told twice. His romantic duties complete, there was no more holding back the horny teenage boy inside. His hand guided his achingly hard shaft between her spread legs, already feeling her warm wetness against the head. And as he finally thrust himself inside her and Sarah bit back a yelp of pain to mourn the loss of her virginity, instinct took over. Sarah flung her arms around Elliot’s neck, Elliot braced his hands against the bed at Sarah’s sides, and together they began to thrust.

The feeling was incredible, like nothing he’d ever felt or could have imagined feeling. She was so warm inside, so snug, so enticingly wet. It was a drug, and its name was Sarah. Sure, it wasn’t perfect; his arms were already straining from holding himself up, their thrusts were erratic and difficult to get in synch, and he was pretty sure Sarah was enduring a fair bit more pain than she was letting on. But she was thrusting up at him, driving their joining just as much as he was, and there was no sign of wanting to stop. Their foreheads rested against each other, stealing kisses as often as the thought struck them and whispering sweet nothings and washing hot, heated breaths across each other’s lips in between until, far too soon, Elliot could feel that familiar plateau approaching.

“Sarah…jesus, Sarah…..I-I can’t keep this up…I-I’m gonna lose it…” he murmured, his thrusts getting even more erratic.

“It’s okay…do it…” she whispered back. “I’m safe…”

Elliot was certain from her much calmer and less labored tone that Sarah was nowhere near her own peak, but there was nothing he could do about it now, he was just way too close to his own release. Thank god he’d taken the time to get her off first, at least. So it was with only a minimal feeling of guilt that he gave in to orgasm, grunting and holding her body tightly against his and emptying himself inside her warm, quivering slit before he collapsed on top of her in exhaustion.

“Nnnhh…holy fuck, Sarah…that was…incredible…” he managed to breathe out.

“Wonderful…” Sarah agreed, hugging him tightly as her body relaxed. “Was I your first…?”

Elliot had to struggle to nod and talk at the same time. “Y-yeah…and I guess I was yours…”

Sarah nodded as well. “Guess that was…a little obvious from the…pain and bleeding thing…”

“S-sorry…if I hurt you…”

“Don’t worry, I’m fine…heh…it’ll be better next time,” Sarah added with a reassuring smile.

“…Next time?”

She nodded breathlessly. “Oh my god yeah, no WAY do we only do that once…”

“…I love you so much right now.”

“Heh…pervert…” she muttered at him, but he knew she didn’t really mean it. A second later they fell silent, save for their labored lungs struggling to catch up with their oxygen demands, and they merely held each other, murmuring soft “I love yous” and basking in the quiet, blissful afterglow of their virginal efforts for as long as circumstance would allow them.

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The Present...

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“…Holy hell, Elliot…” Tedd marveled, staring in vacant, slack-jawed awe.

“Yeah…it was a hell of a first night,” Elliot agreed with a breathless nod.

Tedd couldn’t suppress his curiosity, despite how vividly Elliot had described it. “Was she…?”

“…Gorgeous? Shyeah…I mean I knew she was beautiful, but seeing her just…in nothing…god she was sexy…”

“Heh-heh, naked girls usually are…especially girlfriends.”

Elliot couldn’t resist a boyish grin. “Amen to that. Man, you are so lucky yours just randomly wanders around naked. I don’t know how you don’t have a perpetual hard-on.”

“Ah-heh, well…that’s a little different than your situation.” Tedd flushed brightly at the mention of Grace, dodging the attention quickly. “So…you guys did it, like, right there in her house?”

“Yeah…we didn’t really think it through that well.”

“Man, that’s…intense,” Tedd marveled. “How the heck did her parents not notice anything?”

“Well…actually, they, uh, did notice…we tried to be quiet, but…”

“Heh, she’s a little loud?”

Elliot started to get pink again at that. “…Not normally, but…when she’s, uh…close to her…peak…”

Tedd flushed at that as well. “O-oh, yeah…?”

“Y-yeah…when she’s…y’know, there. She gets…squeaky. Really high-pitched squeaky.”

“…Squeaky? What, like in a chew toy kind of way?”

“In a ‘when did squirrel-Grace get here and discover baby animals?’ kind of way.”

“…jeez, no wonder her parents noticed. Probably came running thinking she was hurt or something.”

“Yeah, that…was pretty much the most embarrassing moment ever. We barely get to lie there for two minutes afterward before they storm in. But they were actually pretty okay with it. Sarah’d been on birth control for a while, so they knew we were being safe about it--”

“So she was on birth control before you guys started doing it?” Tedd interjected with a snicker. “You sure she hadn’t been planning it in advance?”

“…I know how it sounds, but she swears that wasn’t the reason. I guess girls just…do that sometimes. For, y’know. Feminine issues.”

“…Gross.”

“Anwyay,” Elliot quickly moved on, “and we’ve been together for so long that her parents weren’t exactly surprised, so the only thing I really had to contend with was her dad being…well, a dad.”

Tedd couldn’t stop the chuckles. “Oh man, I can just imagine how that went. ‘So, Elliot, you’re defiling my daughter now, eh?’”

“Heh, nothing quite that passive-aggressive. Just, y’know, the usual ‘threats of bodily harm if I ever hurt her,’ that kind of thing. Still not a fun conversation, though. You’re lucky you don’t have to deal with anything like that with Grace.”

Tedd’s chuckles quickly petered out again. “Eh-heh…yeah, lucky…”

“Then again, I guess her brothers can be pretty protective of her, so that might be something you’d have to deal with…”

“…Yeah…”

Elliot gave Tedd a concerned look. “Okay, every time I mention Grace, you’re getting all weird and awkward. What’s wrong?”

“I am not getting weird and awkward!” Tedd defended himself, a little too quickly.

“Okay, whatever you’d call it, then. Seriously, what’s up?”

“Nothing’s ‘up’, we’re perfectly fine!”

“You said you wanted to talk about you and Grace earlier. What, did that just dry up?”

“……”

“…Alright, if that’s what you want,” Elliot shrugged and started to stand up.

“…Nnhh, wait.”

Elliot immediately sat back down, as though he’d expected it. “Yes?”

Tedd fidgeted with his hands in his lap. “…It’s not that something’s wrong, exactly, we’re still happy together and everything.”

“But?”

“And we still totally love each other, and we’re not drifting apart or fighting all the time or anything like that--”

“But?” Elliot patiently pressed.

“…But we’re not exactly…going anywhere.”

“What are you talking about? You go out all the time. We’ve had like five double dates.”

“No, I mean, going anywhere in the relationship. Grace just kind of seems…content. Like she doesn’t want to move forward at all. And that’s fine for a while, but it’s been this way for almost a year now…eventually you have to have some sort of…forward progress…”

Elliot took a long moment to process that before coming to the most obvious conclusion first. “…Oh! Oh, you mean…? Like…Sarah and I?”

Tedd’s blush was instantaneous. “I-I’m not saying that!”

“Well then what are you saying?”

“Nnhh…” Tedd groaned a little. “See, this is why I wasn’t gonna say anything, it’s really hard to explain it without sounding like I just want to…get more physical stuff going…”

Elliot raised an eyebrow in slight surprise. “…Are you saying you and Grace haven’t had…?”

“N-no, no, Jesus, no…!” Tedd quickly insisted.

“…But you want to?”

“W-well, no, I…I mean yeah, sort of, but…I-I mean…it…nnnhh!!” His head dropped and met the coffee table with a thud. “See what I mean…? No matter what I say it keeps coming out like I just want…sex.”

“It’s okay, I think I get it,” Elliot finally relieved him. “You feel like things aren’t going anywhere, in any aspect of the relationship. Right?”

Tedd nodded against the table. “Yeah, that’s…a lot better.”

“Have you told Grace that?”

“Oh, god, no. I already didn’t want you thinking I just wanted to get sex, making her think that would be ten times worse…”

“Tedd, you realize that Grace is about ten times less likely to think that than me, right?”

“…Well…”

“Come on, Tedd, even I know this. Her brain’s just not wired that way. If you told her you wanted to ‘take the next step’ with her, she’d probably think you were proposing marriage before she thought you were proposing sex.”

This time Tedd went white rather than red. “…don’t even joke like that.”

“I’m just saying, I really don’t think she’s gonna get the wrong idea. And nothing’ll change if you don’t say something.”

“But what if she gets freaked out?”

“Do you really think she’s going to object to a more intimate relationship?”

“Well--”

“I’ll give you a hint, the answer is ‘no.’ Tedd, she’s crazy about you. I’m kind of surprised she hasn’t said anything about wanting to go further with you.”

“…Really?”

“Oh, for sure. I don’t know, maybe she’s thought about it in private and she’s just waiting for you to suggest it. Maybe it hasn’t even occurred to her at all.”

“There’s no way it’s that simple.”

“I think you’re over-thinking it,” Elliot said, clapping his friend on the shoulder in a brotherly fashion. “Just talk to her, Tedd. You can’t be afraid to talk to your girlfriend about your relationship, believe me.”

Tedd heaved a sigh at that. “…You sure she won’t laugh me off the face of the earth?”

Elliot chuckled and smiled reassuringly. “I’m sure. And definitely don’t hide behind these,” he added, snagging the oversized glasses off the top of Tedd’s head.

Tedd jerked and swiped for them far too slowly. “H-hey! What’s wrong with glasses?”

“Normal glasses? Nothing. These big honking monsters? It’ll make her feel like you’re putting a wall between you.” Elliot smiled teasingly as he handed them back. “Trust me, she’ll appreciate you looking her in the eye when propositioning her.”

“Har har…” Tedd rolled his eyes only half-heartedly, swiping them back and returning them to the top of his head. “…Thanks. I’ll give it a try tonight.”

“Good idea,” Elliot agreed. “The sooner the better. And don’t stress it, I’m sure it’ll work out just fine.”

“Yeah yeah, don’t you have a girlfriend of your own to get ready for tonight?”

“Eh-heh…”

Tedd smirked a little once again. “Lucky bastard.”

Elliot shared a laugh with him, the sounds dying away as he gazed off in the distance. “Man…I’m gonna miss this.”

“Miss what?” Tedd asked.

“This. Just…hanging out together, whenever we want. This summer’s the last chance we’ll have.”

“…O-oh. R-right…”

“…I mean yeah, college’ll be fun too and all…but it’s gonna suck not being able to hang out just whenever, y’know? I’m gonna miss that.” Elliot couldn’t help but smile. “We’ve had some good times.”

“…Yeah. I guess we have.”

“…But hey, it’s not like we’re never seeing each other again, yeah? We’ll still have breaks and holidays and stuff. Right?” Elliot smiled over at Tedd, but it slowly faded as he noticed Tedd’s glasses had come back down over his eyes and he was getting up to leave. “…Tedd?”

“I should…go talk to Grace,” came his answer, his voice suddenly a little more hollow.

“…Oh. Well, alright…good lu--”

The front door slammed shut before he could finish. Tedd was gone.

Elliot scratched his head, giving the door his best ‘surprised’ stare. “What was that about…?”
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