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Celestial Sensations	By : FireCracker Category: DC Verse Comics > Batman Views: 3371 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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author: FireCracker
Archive? You'd better.
Warnings: For once, none. Don’t get used to it, though.
Characters: Loethe the Hell Queen, her daughters and Tala.
Special mentions: Phantom Stranger, Bruce Wayne

Some serious girl talk with a potential fight looming. But wait, it’s in Hell.
CELESTIAL SENSATIONS: SECRETS OF A QUEEN
Hell, the palace of BluddWerkk.
Loethe lounged in her guest chambers surrounded by her daughters. They all relaxed lazily on brightly colored ottomans, drinking and discussing men.
The Queen raised her boiling glass of liquor. “It’s good to have all my girls together these days. Infernal duties tend to keep everyone spread out, and I miss all the good chatter.”
Serona laughed. “I should think the prophecy would be keeping you busy, mother.”
“So it has. Many surprises are in store.”
“And deceptions, I would think.” Nuguri chimed in. “So. When is our dear King going to know what hit him?”
“In my own good time. There is no hurry now.”
“But surely he’ll sense the truth fairly soon.”
Loethe was smug. “His distance favors my plans. I don’t doubt he’ll be angry. However, his heart always softens. I fully expect it.”
Bazura was curious. “Why aren’t Godol and Anduu here?”
“Because they can’t keep a secret to save their infernal lives. Besides, they’re usually somewhere around the palace. I spend less time with the rest of you.”
“But haven’t they seen you?”
“Yes, and I’ve told them to keep quiet about this. In any case, the prophecy proceeds as planned. I couldn’t be more pleased.”
Serona poured herself another drink. “Have the seers gleaned any new information that we’re unaware of?”
“Not at this time. However, there’s a major development occurring in the balance that favors the dark. I’m not at liberty yet to say what it is, but there will be a formal council meeting in the next few weeks. Your father will return at his appointed time and details will be discussed.”
“Sounds fascinating.”
“Aye, but for his endless wandering we could have set the schedule already. I’ve taught myself to be patient with his dual aspect.”
Nuguri chuckled. “Still thinking he’ll turn completely, mother?”
“It won’t happen, I realize that. And yet, heaven rejects him utterly. That always gives me hope.”
“But you know he has a need for helping the lost and weak.”
“The strength of his balance makes him prime. But enough of your father for now. We were discussing men?”
Bazura stretched her long legs. “Ah, girl talk. After listening to Darkseids’ drones babbling about anti-life, it’s a refreshing change.”
“Now that’s one ugly bastard.” Serona snorted, stirring her drink with a bone. “I wouldn’t even screw him out of pity.”
“Why not, sister? You could do him with a bag over his head.”
“F that. I’d still have to look at that scabby body. No thanks.”
Loethe cackled in laughter. “Ah, these are the times that warm my black heart!”
Nuguri sucked hot blood through a straw. “And I suppose you’ve done the ugly stuff yourself?”
“Only when bored. Sometimes I take it as a challenge!”
“Ha! Mortals call it Slumpbusting.”
Loethe gulped from her goblet. “Of course, they’d have to have the right equipment. A big cock makes up for a lot of ugly.”
“Especially in the dark, eh?”
“Daughter, you’re foul. I love it.”
Serona crunched her bone straw. “I suppose you could take an ugly fucker and give him glamour for a bit. Might make it tolerable.”
Bazura chimed in. “Problem is, you’re still reminded that the ugly is there under the skin. But hell, I’ve been drunk enough times not to care. It all feels the same when you’re hammered.”
Serona sniffed in disgust. “Maybe so, but anything I don’t wish to lick after I finish gets put out. I’ll tolerate criminals and idiots, but not ugly.”
“Good point.”
“Hmm.” Loethe traced a finger around her goblet. “What do you all think of your father’s latest pet?”
Nuguri replied right away. “Tasty. Verrry tasty. I made him an offer myself.”
“Really? Where was this?”
“Right in front of father.”
Loethe paused. “Your nerve astounds even me at times. What did he say?”
Nuguri flipped her hair casually. “You know father. I got a withering look and implied threat.”
“I’m surprised you moved so quickly.” Bazura commented. “Usually you take time to appraise your men.”
“There was no need. Father is completely smitten with the mortal. So it amused me to irritate him by teasing his pet.”
“Ill advised, Nuguri.”
“I fear nothing, sister. You know this.”
“Then you’re a liar or a fool.”
“I give hard lessons, too.”
“Enough.” Loethe snapped. “We aren’t here to squabble amongst ourselves.”
“Mother’s right.” Serona lifted her glass. “Although it might be interesting to see the two of you go at it.”
Bazura turned her long neck. “With you agitating and cheerleading on the sidelines. Some things never change.”
“Brat.” Nuguri agreed.
“I want other opinions.” Loethe stated flatly.
Bazura coiled her tail. “His intelligence impresses me the most. I’ve done research on his background. In some ways he actually thinks like an immortal.”
“Indeed? And what say you, Serona?”
“Wayne has charisma, I’ll give him that. No wonder in that others like his charms.”
Loethe sipped her drink casually. “Your father has good taste, as always.”
“Maybe it’s the batman gear. Although the whole urban vigilante thing is a curious way to work off inner turmoil.”
Bazura brightened. “The Justice Leaguers father trucks with. Some are quite fetching, I think.”
Nuguri raised her goblet. “Ah. And how would you rate them?”
“Scale of one to ten!”
“Start off.”
“Superman.”
“Nice, if you like Ken Dolls. Still, he’s pretty and quite sturdy. I’d give it a go.”
“Rate?”
“Mm. Give him a 9 flat.”
“I’d go a hair higher.” Serona chimed in. “9.2!”
Loethe ran a finger across her lips. “Ah, but does he have a ‘pole’ position? After all, good looks mean nothing without the prize.”
“True. And those briefs do look a little…small. Still…”
“What about Green Lantern?” Nuguri wondered. “You know I love renegades. He seems tasty.”
“Arrogant, too.” Serona mused. “Not bad on the eyes, either. I’ll give him an 8.8.”
Bazura swished her glass. “Wait, which Green Lantern?”
“Oh. The Hal Jordan one. Surely you didn’t think I meant Guy Gardner?”
“Heaven no! While I like his foul attitude, that bowl haircut is atrocious.”
“So give him a style and sex him senseless, sister. In any case, give a grade. Hal Jordan?”
“I like that one. Make it…9.1.”
“8.6.”
“8.9.”
“How about a different tack?” Nuguri suggested. “Anyone like Cyborg?”
“An interesting possibility.” Loethe agreed. “Why, working around that metal should prove a day’s work in itself!”
“Can you say…O-V-E-R-L-O-A-D!!”
They all cracked in laughter.
“Good one, sister!” Bazura held her sides. “After all, the proof’s in the package!”
“9.1”
“8.9!”
“9 flat.”
“The Flash.” Serona threw out.
“Hmm. Maybe the prettiest one, but disgustingly wholesome.” Loethe crinkled her nose. “So for that he loses points. 8.2.”
Serona disagreed. “I’m of a different mind, mother. I say corrupting him would be the sweetest. 9.3.”
Bazura considered that.“Have you seen the ass on him? Nice! So for that alone I’ll go 9.5.”
Nuguri was smiling. “You know what they say about speedsters in bed! I’d have to add him to my collection. 9.6.”
“And then there’s-“
Before they could talk further, a stocky orange demon strutted in. He was bearded and wearing multilayered robes.
“Pardon the interruption, royals. You have a guest requesting immediate audience.”
Loethe responded immediately. “Indeed, Kuriyn? We rarely get such surprise visits without appointment.”
Kuriyn nodded. “Aye, my Queen. It’s the Lady Tala. She claims the two of you have unfinished business, and would like to resolve the matter.”
Nuguri sat up quickly. “She has the gall to show up here? After all her antics-“
Loethe held up a hand. “Peace, daughter. Let’s she what she wants. It should prove amusing.”
“I’m laughing already.” Serona was sarcastic.
()
Tala strutted in, heels clicking over shiny stone. Her massive mane of raven tresses flew everywhere. Catlike amber eyes sparked in irritation.
“Greetings, Loethe. I’m surprised you granted this audience so easily.”
Loethe eased to a seated position. “The grace of a Queen. Now, what do you want?”
“You know what I want!”
“I refuse to hand him over. Next.”
“Idiot! I’m talking about my liver. My power is halved without it.”
Loethe was smug. “Yes, I’m aware of that. Payment collected for illegal seizure.”
“Bah. What illegal? The Stranger was mine before you and that ancient cadre interfered.”
“Might I remind you of the prophecy?”
“You weren’t the only possibility for it to occur.”
“Impossible!” Bazura sounded surprised.
“Ah, so your Queen never explained that, did she?” Tala turned. “All of you have been lied to.”
“Perhaps. But you aren’t on your own turf either. I suggest you use good sense and caution.”
“As much caution as your Queen?” Tala pointed in accusation. “Perhaps we can strike a bargain, Loethe. My silence for my liver.”
Nuguri was suspicious. “What’s she talking about?”
Loethe considered before speaking. “You challenged me before, Tala, and lost.”
“It wasn’t an even playing field, we both know that. I also rule a realm, in case you’ve forgotten.”
“I forget nothing. But I do know I’m too strong for your feeble spells.”
Those catlike eyes flared brightly. “Feeble! We battled across the dimensions for a week. Only base treachery won you the day.”
Loethe stood in anger. “Enough! You’ll not speak this way in front of my daughters, or there will be war.”
It was Tala’s turn to be smug. “A careless threat, Loethe. Aren’t you in the throes of the prophecy? Spreading yourself too thin is inadvisable.”
“It’s none of your business.”
“No?” Tala glanced at the angry daughters. “Give me what I want and I’ll leave in peace. Otherwise, I may have yet another secret to give. Can you risk it?”
“You wouldn’t dare.”
“I would, since you force my hand. And remember, the prophecy isn’t linear. I only wish a partial claim to that which is also mine. Besides, I need my strength, too.” A snicker.
Bazura had had enough. “You’re out of here-“ a ball of fire crackled around her hand.
Loethe indicated a stop. “Hold. We will strike a new agreement.”
“What? You can’t let her waltz in here, and-“
“Silence, Bazura. I am Queen.” Loethe snapped imperiously.
Nuguri found her voice. “Clearly, there are lies everywhere.” She glared at Tala. “You’ve always wanted my father. But you’re deluded if you think you can walk in here and steal him away.”
Tala flipped her hair. “You have a sense for essential truth, Nuguri. The Book of Illut was tampered with eons ago. Someone with the will and power tore a page loose. That missing page is key to explaining the prophecy. In it’s entirety.”
The daughters gasped in shock.
Tala nodded. “Aye, it’s true. As the Old Ones, if you can wring the truth from their wrinkled tongues. And as for the Stranger, he’s already been mine. A Queen for a Queen? Let fate decide.”
“Speak further and we battle right now.” Loethe warned, her voice low. She stood to her full height.
“I admit I’m not prepared for war at this time.” Tala stated. “Return my property and I will leave in peace.”
Loethe gestured down the hallway. “Ipzet.”
A rangy white demoness appeared suddenly. “You called, o Queen?”
“Go to the royal armory and fetch the black brocaded box wrapped in green rope. Quickly, now.”
“Aye, o Queen. I will return shortly.” She vanished.
()
The goddesses waited in uncomfortable silence.
Tala and Loethe shared several hard stares. It didn’t go unnoticed by the others. Ipzet returned with the box and handed it to Tala. The servant left immediately.
“Now take your wide ass out of here.” Serona snarled at Tala.
“Certainly.” Tala examined the contents of the box. “Ah, how I’ve missed you.”
“Admire yourself later.” Bazura chimed in next. “Leave while you can still walk. You’ve caused enough trouble this day.”
“Such spirit.” Tala walked past them all. “You should be proud, Loethe. Your children are beautiful and strong.” She paused at the hallway entrance.
“Of course, they aren’t as special as they think. But we know what’s what, eh?”
Nuguri blasted the wall next to her, burning a huge crater. Tala barely avoided being struck.
“Temper! You and Anduu remind me of him, girl. More so than the others!” she cackled wildly and disappeared.
Loethe wasn’t pleased. “Nuguri, have the servants repair your damage.”
“Yes, but I have questions-“
“They can wait. I’m afraid our visit is over, children. I need solitude and must think.” Strutting past them all, she abruptly retreated to her private chambers.
()
Her daughters watched her leave with equal parts confusion and anger.
“What do you suppose is going on?” Bazura wondered.
Nuguri stared down the hallway. “I think we need a family conference asap.”
Serona sighed. “I’ve got a bad sense about all this.”
“Aye, these potential secrets could affect our legacy.”
“We’re already legendary, Nuguri. But Tala’s comments are disturbing. She knows something we don’t, and that’s a potential weakness.”
Nuguri nodded. “Come on. Let’s find Anduu and Godol. We need to put our heads together here.”
“Tala came to retrieve her liver right after Crescent Moon.” Bazura pondered.
“What are you getting at?”
“I’m not sure. Our Queen has a successful Crescent Moon and suddenly Tala shows up to gain her full power? The timing of it seems suspicious to me.”
“But what’s the connection?” Serona wanted to know.
“I don’t know. Let me think on this awhile.”
THE END
NEXT: NIGHTMARE PAST
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