Hey, I don't know if the author can see this, but I was wondering if they're still around. I'm trying to write a WW fanfic of my own and can use a co-writer.
Sexy stuff, good concepts. I would not scoff at other's fantasies as `gross'. Everyone has different tastes and while I prefer much more build-up and detail then your example, there's no call for bashing on others. Well you present a good story, let's see where it goes.
Very nice first chapter; good build-up.
I'm eager to see how Wonder Woman's training will progress.