Fantastically thrilling and intensely erotic and violent. My only issue is the ending of what's there right now; more of Barbara's punishment and conversion would have really pulled it all together. Because, right now, there's a bit of ambiguity over whether Harley took Batgirl with her or not. I want to know what happened! Still, really well-written and creative.
Noo! Poor mike, I liked him but really good story. I'm no pro but I like your writing, easy to read and follow what's going on. Looking forward to a sequel.