rate_review Reviews

Would love to see a second part of this with fucking.

Great story. Think you can do a similar one with Olivia Benson from Law and Order SVU?

I'm not sure what I enjoyed more, the head giving or that you wrote a black character proper English. Either way I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.

Good to see you writing. This was pretty good. Really hoping for an update to your Whoring the Debt or Ronso stories.

Hm, continue?

Fantastic! A sequel could be fun, with him slowly corrupting her...

Thoroughly enjoyed the fiction. You describe things pretty well, from actions to what goes on in the male lead's head, but Barbara, I think, could use some more depth, unless all you want is her to get to it. If that is the case, I think more interesting would be to keep away from her thoughts, and just focus on Batgirl suddenly going crazy for BBC.

I would enjoy to see Barbara falling further, being tagged along for neighborhood parties to be shared, being used to pay off debts, adapting and spiraling down a new lifestyle because of her lack of self control.

Whatever you decide to write about, though, I will be reading! Your stories are amazing.

Kudos,

Ragnarok.