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May 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Short and the to the point, but without skimping on details.
I don't mind the speaking to public, guess that's modelled more towards the 60s Batman with Adam West where Batman and Robin makes a lot of public appearance. There are even clips of Robin speaking in school and the crowd applauded. And let's not forget the time Robin was manhandled by 4 girls..
I don't mind the speaking to public, guess that's modelled more towards the 60s Batman with Adam West where Batman and Robin makes a lot of public appearance. There are even clips of Robin speaking in school and the crowd applauded. And let's not forget the time Robin was manhandled by 4 girls..
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May 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice stuff so far! I'm eager to see where this goes. I must offer one small criticism; why is Robin speaking in a public setting? Usually public statements and appearances are avoided by the dynamic duo. This isn't to say that I don't think you could justify this, simply that touching on some sort of explanation would strengthen the story's foundation. Either way, keep it up! :)