rate_review Reviews

What I like about your writing is that you take absurd and hackneyed premises and execute them with genius. You keep characters and manage insightful progressions into their development. The best part of this story is your Harley, she's entertaining, sexy and broken. I really respect your ability to finish a story. Endings, especially open ended ones, are very difficult for me.

You know, I started reading this with suitably low expectations given the premise, but I'm actually surprised at how entertaining it is. Oh sure, it's borderline absurd at times, but I don't know, even that somehow seems to come together with the rest. I've never really been able to appreciate sex in stories, but here it seems to be an actual part of the plot and not just some cheap thrill for the sake of it.

On a more personal note, Diana, eh? I hope you're going somewhere with that, I always thought she'd make an interesting partner for the bat to take him outside his comfort zone.

This is definitly interesting. I'd love to see it continue. I also wouldn't mind seeing what some other characters are up to. Especially Cass and Steph. Those two get no actual love from DC.

Its too bad Catwoman didn't marry Bruce Wayne too.
She could have helped 'converting' the other 2.

Oh my god. This was very well written. Probably the best characterization of Bruce Wayne/Batman I've EVER seen on this site. I hope you update this story as soon as possible. It'd also be cool to see some other super couples in some other stores too.

Looks like Ivy hasn't changed.

Great story so far. Haven't spoken to you since our days on LiveJournal when I was V5_Vendetta and you were Seriousfic and I was commenting on your Spider-Man stuff. Walking down memory lane aside, this is actually a pretty good story so far, not only sexy but hilarious (ok, more hilarious than sexy right now) AND in-character. I trust Bruce to have had himself inoculated in preparation for anything Ivy and Harley could throw at him, and I'm pleasantly surprised to see Ivy so cold-bloodedly vicious even in the wake of Bruce's kindness; other writers would have Ivy quickly warm up to Bruce/Batman, but you've made it clear that Ivy is going to be one hard sell even with Bruce's preparations. I'm particularly amused by how Ivy's so possessive of Harley's fertility, and Jason's, Stephanie's, and Damian's remarks were a riot. Looking forward to more of this story.

NO!
YOU CAN"T END IT THERE!

Interesting story, hope there is more to come and would like some heroines to join such as Zatanna.

Hmm, I think this story has some interesting potential. You do a good job trying to make dialogue that reflects the character's personalities. I don't really have any criticisms of this chapter. You and your beta obviously put a lot of work into it.

I will look forward to seeing more from this story.