rate_review Reviews

Damn! You are awesome you know that, right?

I had to bookmark this story because it is so... compelling to read.

Looking foward to your next chapters!

Would be great to see the cat getting a bit of action too, you know? ;)

Fun chapter with Vikki Vale. Poor girl though being manhandled so! Lol. It was interesting to see Brue much less in control than previous chapters. A streak the looks to continue next time.

Will be hoping to see some more of the backup cast in that chapter though.

I love this story so damn much. Really the only reason I keep coming on here is to check if it's updated again

Very very good. I can't wait for more on this. I enjoy the idea that others are blowing up his answering machine at that. I'm curious to see Ivy's reaction if she gets the + sign.

More sex, more scheming Ivy, more women. All good. You are a great author, I would have left the story finished a few chapters back but you kept it going and going well.

I'd love to read a couple of chapters focusing on Nightwing and his own harem.

I love this story but I wish you would hurry up and make MORE PLEASE. Its written so well its better then any other story I've read. Please Concentrate on this story its immaculate.

lol. The very moment I posted my review of the first five chapters, I come out of the story and there's another one. Win!

Cool chapter if a little short. Definitely builds the suspense well for the next chapter and highlights that Bruce's position could be more perilous than we thought before. If Ivy was a little more direct with her problem solving he could be serious trouble right now.

Hi Zev. I've dipped in an out of your stuff from time to time but these two Batman fics, this one and the batgirl costume one are two I've really enjoyed and I've read through all 5 chapters of this one so far.

So yeah, I think you've really captured all the different personalities in this, as far as I can tell. I've only really seen the DCA and movies. So the others I've merely heard about in passing. Anyway, the wedding reception with the many sidekick' and there speeches was hilarious.As were the answering machine messages in the ivy sex chapter.

And Batman's interior monologue is appropriate dry with out being un-entertaining and his approach to taming the duo is interesting. As his his thawing mental attitude to them after the sex.

one does have to wonder about his long term plan though. how long can he keep it up before they will discover he's Batman? I can't really see him trusting two former villianesses with that any time sooner ether but I may be wrong.

A final note, I really enjoyed Wonder Woman's appearence. Definitely had good vibes of their relationship on the justice league cartoon. All in all good work and i look forward to reading more.

Wow, great story! My only complaint is the inclusion of Diana. I've always thought that failed pairing was one of the worst out-of-the-blue things DC ever attempted, between two characters that have never expressed interest in each other. Even the terrible marriage between Storm and Black Panther over in Marvel made more sense, and they had to retcon those character's entire history to make that even slightly plausible! I really hope that you do not include Diana in this relationship, and continue focusing on Harley and Ivy. I guess I shall see. I'd hate to have to drop what is one of the only well-written Batman stories I've found.