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April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it, please continue.
Shapeshifting characters open up all sorts of interesting possibilities.
Shapeshifting characters open up all sorts of interesting possibilities.
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April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah a continuation of a cancelled Greg Weisman series... Genius.
This is well written and a great point to continue Young Justice. I really like your Artemis, but she could use a bit more snarkiness. (Which I suspect would be more apt in a second chapter.) This is a well written fic, Young Justice definitely needs more het and femslash fics.
You vacillate between present tense and past tense all throughout your story. I suggest you pick one tense and stick with it and I plead that you pick past tense (which is just easier to read). There're several homophone errors (which I notice because I fuck them up pretty badly myself) but a good Beta Reader would solve that problem pretty quickly.
This is your first fic? Well done. I hope you keep writing and keep improving, it's worth it.
This is well written and a great point to continue Young Justice. I really like your Artemis, but she could use a bit more snarkiness. (Which I suspect would be more apt in a second chapter.) This is a well written fic, Young Justice definitely needs more het and femslash fics.
You vacillate between present tense and past tense all throughout your story. I suggest you pick one tense and stick with it and I plead that you pick past tense (which is just easier to read). There're several homophone errors (which I notice because I fuck them up pretty badly myself) but a good Beta Reader would solve that problem pretty quickly.
This is your first fic? Well done. I hope you keep writing and keep improving, it's worth it.