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I'm enjoying this story every bit as much as I'm enjoying my own Teen Titans story. You do make several mistakes with your writing but your story is awesome! I'm looking forward to reading more of your story and I hope you will read and review my story Teen Titans and a Sex-fiend as well.Btw in that last chapter I saw the whole switch to the alternate dimension thing coming, that was the perfect point to try to slip it in there; very clever.

I want SlutRaven to meet Blackfire.

Wonderful Job. It's pretty neat to watch Raven try and deal with S-Rae's shenanigans and this Beast Boy thing could go either way. I also wonder if the S-Titans are as "open" as S-Rae is. It would be interesting to see S-Starfire and S-Robin. Maybe they could pay a visit?

I don't mean to rush you nor anything, i'm just posting this to let you know you haven't lost me, i'm still quite interested in reading this all the way :)

Not being used to the slang "box" for vagina (though not complety unfamiliar with it) took me a little while to manage to make myself stop seeing Raven as a Minecraft character or old style autobot whenever that worded popped up xD

Feels weird to use a word usually used to describe somthing that only has flat sides and sharp corners to call somthing full of curved surfaces xD


But somehow that was not enough to detract from the enjoyment of the second chapter. That was quite nice, keep up the good work!

First hetero TT fic 'round here for a long time, and what a treat it is: Decent prose and really some extensive character detail around here, I particularly liked the Comedy/Drama mask bit (though I would have thought it'd be comedy/tragedy). I just cringe at the public embarrassment likely in store for poor Raven.

This seems like a really interesting start to a story. It should be really interesting to see how it plays out. Looking forward to more.

I can only hope you update posthaste. As for what I'd like to see, so long as it stays true to the story title I have nothing to contribute.