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Lol :) i can only agree with Dick's comment about Bruce teaching Damian how to properly grieve :D the blind leading the blind and all that :)

I'm so glad you keep all four boys alive for this fic :) they are awesome together, even if Damian still needs to learn true team work :)

Reading on!

Lol :) 'I'm bisexual' 'Duly noted'. ROTFLMAO :) they couldn't be anymore cool-headed about it, that's for sure :D and Damian needs some serious help so as to stop sounding like a terminator ;p at least Jai put him in his place :)

This is so good, but incomplete... Any hope for the rest of it to be posted as well?

Reading on for now :)

ROTFLMAO :) Damian is so cute lock picking the door to ask to Lian, and then locking it back :)

I am not familiar with the official characterization of the boy, but I adore yours :)

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I loved this story. Please write more!

i really like this story hope you write more.

I just read this entire story last night and I love it. It had me laughing so hard I nearly fell out of my chair at some points, it had me horrified and sad at Lian's death (even though I already knew she was going to die as she is dead in the comics), and I'm frigging ticked off at Jai for trying to manipulate Damian! I feel your style is pretty solid and flows beautifully. I do have one question, but it has nothing to do with the story and more to do with the comics if you know the answer: Was Lian still alive when Damian showed up in the comics? I was under the impression that she'd already been dead for awhile, but I'm not 100% sure. If she was, that would make your story all the more awesome. ^-^ Keep up the great work!!