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for Batgirl's Uptown Affairs Part 1

by AdultBat

schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was sublime. I found the Siren a really interesting character. Apart from the sexyness, you would have had me scrambling to the Batman wiki to verify if she's a real character or not. The sex scenes were well written, you had an interesting concept that you really managed to pull off. I loved the little asides you threw us, too, like Dick's blowjob from Catwoman. Good stuff.

I noticed a few spelling errors, mostly misuses of "your" and "you're", but that's easy to fix.

I'm am definitely looking forward to whatever's in store for Babs :D
person jonoave
schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The characters are quite sexualised, but not too out of character. Very nicely written. Just finished part 2 and can't wait to read the rest. Great job!

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