rate_review Reviews

Been reading this follow-up ever since 'When Spidey Met Batgirl'; its been a really good read. Can't wait to see what Babs want to talk about with our favorite Wall Crawler. Quick question- Are you gonna keep everything up to date since ASM 700 came out? Cause if so, It'll be interesting (imo, kinda weired) how everything ended with that issue. Keep up the good work :)

alright, can't wait for it

I always get annoyed that you take so long in between chapters. Then I read the new chapter and I remember that something this good takes time. Bravo, excelsior, keep it up!

This is, without a doubt, the best Spider-man story I have ever read. The banter, the wordplay, the genius little insights in every chapter, tie this package up so very nicely. I love how you bring every character we know to life. My favorite moment is the conversation between Peter and Johnny in Chapter Eleven. I love Spider-man and you write him better than any fanfiction author I have ever encountered and even still better than most comic book authors.

Batgirl, Goddammit do I love Batgirl. Your Barbara Gordon is my favorite Barbara Gordon I have ever encountered. I love the snark, the intelligence and the sexuality you bring out of this woman.

Your story construction is something I envy. You manage to interweave sexual scenarios into a story without sacrificing pacing or interest of the reader. And the sex doesn't seem mindless or derivative with each scene.

Personally, when I review, I like to take at least something I can criticize constructively. But I really don't have anything to pick at, to point out or to ask of. I am eagerly awaiting the conclusion. Thank you.

Now if you don't mind, I'm going to read the whole thing once again.

I'm really liking this story, but can I make a request? I would like to see Cassandra Cain, the second Batgirl, make an appearance. It seems to me that with her ability to ready body language she would be quite good at masturbation or sex. I would also like to see Tim Drake if at all possible.
Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to see more soon.

Eh. Confusing time jump is confusing. I hadn't figured out the faked death thing. had this weird idea it was parallel timeline thing.

The spidery/torch banter/bromance is awesome though.

The sex was a little light this chapter, but you know what? I didn't mind it all. I enjoyed seeing where everyone was in their life right now, surprised that you jumped ahead so far, but it was cool. That last part with the "bromance" was cool too.

Wonder if Spider-Man is going to come across Barabara during her stay in NYC. I know he won't be looking for her, since he thinks she's dead, but people cross paths by accident all the time.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

So glad this story is back...
The Johnny/Peter bit at the end made me laugh my ass off, better than the actual Roomate Experiment issue

I honestly don't want this universe to end, this story specifically. That being said I know things have to come to an end and I know that it's coming soon. Everything up until that last little part at the end would have been a bitter sweet ending, but a good one all the same.

I'm glad that you're not a dick and end it with an out of left field death. Looking forward to reading more.

Wow. That whole future tense section is weird as all hell. That contains details Pete doesn't know so it can't just be his imagination can it?

Other than it was interesting that you actually delved into the actual consequences of the porno-time field. Interesting insight into the characters. Oh and the FF appears! ever-expanding cast is ever-expanding.

No Cyke/Emma scene though? :-(