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Like WitchbladeHell said, Spidey and Ms Marvel did have a date in Ms Marvel #47. They beat up a thug, Ms Marvel reminds Spidey of the date he wanted and takes him to a nice restaurant, they have a nice but slightly awkward time together, two people working for Norman Osborn arrive to arrest Carol but she handles them with ease while Peter continues to eat his meal, they fly off and discover they have something in common which is their love of junk food and the issue ends with them sitting on a rooftop eating hot dogs together and enjoying each other's company. Spidey even made an appearance at the end of #50 (the last issue of the series) where the two of them were again eating hot dogs together with Ms Marvel telling him about her recent encounter with Mystique and how, despite all the hardships she has been through recently, she feels good about herself and she wanted to tell someone about it so she chose Spidey which was a nice way to end the series (even if the story itself wasn't that great). Both of these took place before the Seige: Spider-Man one shot.

Apart from that this was a really good story you wrote. I've been waiting for someone to write a Spidey/Ms Marvel fanfic for a while now and finally someone has so thank you very much. Keep up the good work.

Cool fic. Not caught up on modern comics. Ms Marvel is Ms Marvel again? Though she went by Warbird. Still pretty hot, though the time jumps at the end amused me.

the captcha for this was 'be pickaxed' not very friendly at all...

Carol Danvers went back to being Ms. Marvel after being called Warbird for a while a few years back. I think before the Civil War storyline.

I don't normally read str8-sex stories on this site but I really like the idea of Carol and Peter being together. I really hope it happens someday even though it would never last, they never do.

That was awesome and hot. I love Carol's thoughts about Peter. It's always cool to wonder what the others on the team might think of him. They need to have him and Clint trying to one-up each other more.

Just as a side note: Carol and Peter did go on a date. They took down a small-time baddie together and she sprung it on him. It was cute and awkward at first, amazing how well Peter can clam up at times, but then Carol is attacked by two idiots trying to arrest her. Peter's in his civvies and can't help out, not that he needs to, he just enjoys the ass-whoopin'. Afterwards she flies him around to grab some street-meat-chilli-dogs, when they find common ground on their love of junk food, then park it on a rooftop over-looking the city. (girly squeal!) ;3

That was awesome. Thanks for doing a story like this. It was a ton of fun. I've longed to see good M/F Marvel Universe stories like this pairing up Spider-man or some other hot MU superheroine babes. This was very fun and passionate. I like Ms. Marvel and Spidey together. If you ever had the inkling to do another one of these, I'd like Ms. Marvel and Spidey get together. It's funny how Ms. Marvel put Spider-man in her top 5 or 3. Who would've been better than Spidey based off that performance? Wolverine maybe? She and Wolverine were close at one point.

One critique. I like that you reference Ms. Marvel's alcoholism. However, I don't think she should be drinking at all. She's essentially falling off the wagon again. Her alcoholism nearly destroyed her. And when it gets to that point and you are recovering as an alcoholic you need to stay sober. For her to break that essentially and "be OK" just doesn't work for me. It's a little nitpick, but I mean whatever.

You should try and continue this story since Spidey and Ms. Marvel in the Avengers would make an awesome couple especially seeing how their friends would react.

Definitely one of your more impressive works. Though it's a one shot, it's still damn good.

Why did you have to remind me of OMD! Gah!... Seriously, though, nice job. I've been considering doing a story like this as well, but you covered all the bases, and it was a fun read. I DO like this pairing, none the less. :)