rate_review Reviews

Great story so far. Thanks for continuing it. I really like this pairing, and I like that you are making them a solid good couple so far rather than just a cheap fling. This is great because we really see stories like this on here with Spider-man and another hot Marvel babe like Ms. Marvel.

One suggestion I think would be kind of neat is Ms. Marvel giving Peter a little TLC after a battle. Some medical treatment followed by some lovin'. It could help reinforce for Ms. Marvel how strongly she feels about Peter.

Also liked that Carol was already like, "hands off" to Spider-woman. Great stuff.

Great story! Keep it up!

Question, is the pairing going to expand or not?
Also, are the tags going to include preg eventually?

Other than that good job it's nice to see someone giving Ms. Marvel some attention.

glad ur keeping this up, hope for more

Hi Agent G,
Another well written chapter. You have a few errors but nothing that really detracts from your story. To answer you Michelle Gonzales question, as of Big Time she is moving back to Chicago. We don't know where Peter is moving yet but he just got his first big check so he'll be rooming somewhere (nice) soon.

YEAH! GO Peter. Fuck her brains out. LOL!

A top notch well written story. You have a few minor errors (called Carol Carole a few times) but nothing that makes it difficult to read.
Keep up the great work.

That was freaking awesome. Since there's an extreme lack of quality M/F Spider-man stories like this I hope you continue. Rather than it being like their next date, maybe you could jump ahead in the relationship a little. See how they are melding together as a couple and maybe how they are doing on Avengers and what not. This pairing is awesome. Its just nice to see a positive straight Spider-man fic pairing for once. I hate One More Day/Brand New Day garbage, but this was really good.

Plz do some more.

OOo! Updates. Nice work Agent G. Really looking forward to the next chapter. The set up at the end of this one promises some really sexy stuff.

Some minor tense/word problems, niggled at me a bit. 'They both felt Hunger!' Seems almost Hulk-speak-y. They both felt Hungry would be the more usual way to put it.

Horray! A new chapter! This was a good one and I like the fact you've updated the 1st chapter as well. I can't wait for more.

I'm really glad you continued with this story man. It's a great concept that hasn't really been tried before and you've really made it work. You've given Peter and Carol some great chemistry. The morning after was very nicely handled, complete with a very nice wake-up call from Carol. lol I'm sure Peter will have to thank Hawkeye for that advice he gave her later on. Now the morning after turns into a date. So the fling suddenly becomes something deeper and it involves baseball no doubt. lol Nice job throwing in a little Yankees/Red Sox rivalry. Loving the bet they made too! I can't help but wonder what the winner is going to enjoy. Should make for some interesting scenes! Again, great job. Keep up the good work on this and Dark Urges! Take care, my friend.