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Great update man! Always worth the wait and this one felt a bit more refined than previous chapters. I like how you used Black Widow. In Ultimate she always did seem to have 'dangerous' tastes to say the least. lol She's also not afraid to use sex to get what she wants. She can be selfish and Peter definitely made good use of that side of her. But I think that trick with his suit really sealed the deal! lol Strange that Black Widow would have a big dick fetish like that, especially one that is driven by the symbiote. Then again it makes about as much sense as Kitty's tentacle fetish. lol You've given plenty of the characters their own unique tastes and now Peter has the equivalent of a female army on his side. All I can say is what a lucky guy. lol So the Kingping comes into the picture next? Guess that means this fic could be going down the home stretch. If that's the case this will definitely rank as one of your best. Please keep up the excellent work my friend! Definitely looking forward to the next part. Peace!

To be honest, I was a little curious when I saw this back at the top of the latest page and so I decided to see what was new in storyville. And honestly... not much. I mean, it's essentially the same as Gwen, MJ, the Silver Sable, and Felicia. I mean, I can understand an over-arcing theme and all... but at this point it's getting to the point where the chapters are "This girl shows up and then here's some exposition and then there's oral sex where he makes her hornier with chemicals and then vaginal sex where he makes her even hornier with more chemicals and then the deviancy of the week and she's hooked on Peter and willing to totally break established character for him". Variety is the spice of life, hombre. I mean, for a superhero fic you've done perilously little actual superhero-related content (which seems to be standard across your body of works), Gwen seemingly developed sudden nymphomania and a wandering eye but that disappeared almost as fast as it appeared with no real reason for either its appearance or removal, Peter could always meet and flirt with a girl... even lure her in for sexual encounters without resorting to drugging her repeatedly to get what he wants.

And hey, it's concrit. So you can delete it if you can't handle it, but at least I can't get in trouble for it.

first I must say I don't like Spider-Man, he is my one of my least favorite Marvels. that being said I love this story. I decided to give it a try because of you x-men story. A thought I had though for some future girl or women as it were would be Ms. Marvel, and Sue Storm.

More please

Well this has to be the bes god damn ultimate spider-man harem fics ever. Many the only. I hope it gets a well deserved update soon

this is one of the best storys iv read. the way youtake the darkest parts of humanity. and at the same time keep them sweet. and keep the feel for the charicters as well. very good work sir.

keep it up

Great chapter man! A real full house so to speak. lol You really got everyone involved in this. Plus, it was kind of nice to see the symbiote have some lines if that's the right way to say it. So it looks like you'll be getting Eddie Brock involved soon? That could be interesting. It may start wearing the girls out though with two sexually charged men vying for 'sustenance' as the symbiote called it. But I think the Black Widow could be a nice addition. lol I look forward to seeing you bring her in. I can see her being a bit to curious and 'determined' to complete her mission to stop. I can't wait to see how that turns out! I know it takes a while for updates with this story, but they're always worth it! Keep up the excellent work my friend! Dark Urges is still at the top of it's class.

Thanks for the interesting update. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Awsome chapter keep up the great work