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I could see an easy Retcon for Aunt May not being dead: Sheild had a feeling that Kingpin might make a move and quietly replaced her with a life like robot

Well this was the first chapter in recent memory that didn't have any actual sex, but it sure had some great phone sex! I love how you had MJ and Peter talking so dirty. It's a creative way for MJ to entice him and it almost worked too. Now it's getting serious. The Kingpin has made his move and he's basically sent Peter across a line he'll never return from. The symboite already has him in a morally gray area. So I can see him being a lot more harsh when he confronts the Kingpin. I look forward to seeing how you do it! This series is dark, but in a good way. You've made it dark without being too angsty. You also threw in a decent story. For that, I deem this story awesome! Keep up the great work buddy! This remains one of the best Spider-Man stories on adultfanfiction.

OH NO! Peter needs to unleash his rage on Kingpin!

long time no read. great new chapters. oh did you know your disclamer now reads "i do now own spiderman"

I hope my review goes through this time! This was another great chapter. I see you're finally setting things up for some action that is more than just sexual. lol As much as I've enjoyed all the hot scenes you've put together, I'm looking forward to seeing how you move things along. It seems the suit is continuing to make Peter more amoral. He's now perfectly okay with taking money rather than leaving it to the cops, which is probably what he would have done before the suit. He's also perfectly okay with celebrating in a very graphic way. lol It's nice to see him and Black Cat really go at it. I don't think they had much one-on-one to this point. It was really done nicely and it shows how far Peter has come since the suit took over. I can't help but wonder if it'll push him to things like murder once the Kingpin starts messing up his life. He'll certainly be more inclined to cross those lines this time. I look forward to seeing how you handle it and how you put together more erotic scene! Keep up the excellent work, my friend! This is by far one of the best stories of it's kind! Take care and best wishes!

glad to see another chapter. awsome chapter keep up the great work

YAY! Good chapter. Spidey's girls are about to be attaked. KILL THE KINGPIN!

another awsome chapter

Great update as always!!!! Natasa's so hot...

Yeah! Peter's got another one. Now to keep Fury off his back and get more pussy out of the deal.