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Great story

Interesting story 

Any chance that Dark Urges is gonna get re-uploaded? Damn good story, seems a waste that you can't read it anymore. Love your works either way, good luck in the future.

Slowly Peter could see their stomachs slowly bulging as the suit pieces in them were growing, feeding off of them like a pregnant woman’s child.
With how much material they have to extract from the girls I am surprised they are surviving it. The huge blood loss is not helping them. and combined with the sudden and massive nutrient loss, which would have had to include breaking down their own bodies to support (if a pregnant woman is missing vitamins, minerals, or other components; their bodies will literally break down bone and tissue and harvest the components for the baby), the loss would kill them.

Overall I would prefer it sticking to a male protagonist instead of the male deutagonists, but it is your story. Hope Peter remains the boss though.

You know what you need to do? You need to find someone online and commision them to make a Spider Man Dark Urges Comic. There are plenty of porn comic online why not have one thats well written and drawn? Because this story is just amazing.
I would read it and every single person who read this would probably read it.
Reply back what you think.

Well, my friend, I know I've said this many times before, but I'll say it again. You've built something truly amazing here. It feels so long ago that you started this story and I really had no idea how far you were going to take it and how you would have it end. Well after reading the final chapter, all I can say it was as satisfying as Peter, Gwen, and MJ seemed to be after their final romp. lol Like all your epilogues, you did a good job of tying up the loose ends. You handled the little things like the three of them being in school, getting themselves a legal guardian, and setting themselves up with money. It helps create a new life that isn't dark, but it isn't very heroic either. The symbiote clearly changed them and that change has really come full circle in many ways. Now they're okay with blackmail, bribing, and in times flat out drugging someone like what Eddie did with Carol Danvers and Black Widow. It's a line they're okay with crossing as symobites and I think you've made it believable even if it is dark.

I was also intrigued to see what they did with Felicia and Kitty. We got another one of those bizarre birth scenes with the symbiotes. It's a very odd way to reproduce, but it definitely makes for some interesting girl-on-girl action to say the least. lol It adds to their ever growing family of sorts and they still had enough energy afterwards for a three way. In many ways, I think that helps encapsulate the theme of this story. Even though it evolved over many years, it definitely came together in the end and you should be very proud. I can't think of too many other stories on this site that have reached the length and depth of quality that you have reached with this. For that, I bow before this story's greatness. Great job, my friend! I know you have so many other ideas, but you've definitely raised the bar with Dark Urges. Until next time, take care and best wishes, my friend.

Regards,
MarvelMaster616

Awsome chapter and Amazing story thinks for shareing it with us.

This was a really good story. A shame that it has come to an end, but at least we get to have an epilouge.

I hope the other stories you have planned will star Spider-Man as well.

This chapter felt like an appropriate culmination of a very dark story. You've taken all these characters down so many dark paths. Now they seem to have reached a tipping point. Peter killed the Kingpin, something that really sets him apart from who he once was. I actually thought you were going to get a bit more extreme with the guy that tried to rape Mary Jane, but given the power she has now I can't see why she would let that happen. After the torture she endured, I think she's well within her right to fight back. Now that the Kingpin is out of the picture, Peter and his team of sorts have plenty of new choices they could make. I look forward to seeing how you tie up the remaining loose ends. This has been a truly amazing story and I applaud you for sticking with it even as the Ultimate comics have completely gone to hell. Your work here is something to be proud of and I think you should take a lot of pride in the final from this story takes, whatever it may be. Again, great job my friend! Keep up the excellent work on this and all your future endeavors. Until next time, take care and best wishes.

MarvelMaster616

anothergreat chapter keep up the great work.