I am thoroughly enjoying the new chapters. I have to admit it was "Perseverance" that got me hooked on TMNT fan fiction. Your writing is fantastic. I love the emotion you put into each character. I can't say it enough.....you are wonderful! Thank you for continuing with this story.
OMG! I am sooooo glad you are back! I missed you. I am excited to have read your newest chapters. I'm eager to see what happens with Slash, and Raph and Leo's blooming romantic relationships. I would love to see Mikey with a new love as well. Welcome back!!!!
I've just found these stories and you're amazing!!! I must admit I'm gutted it stops... I've sat up all night reading and it's after one in the morning. I couldn't stop. I'd love to find out what happens so please, please do carry on!!! Thank you for writing this, you're so talented and in glad I got to share in your talent by reading your work.
Love this! I've read this story and Perseverance through at least 5 times each now and I can't wait for more! I'm inspired to start writing again every time I read these two amazing stories. Please update soon!!!
I have to say that this is without a doubt the best story I have ever read !!!!!!!!!! Is there going to be any more to it? PLEASE God let there be more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am totally hooked on your story. This has got to be one of the best I've ever read. Your writing skills are amazing, you really know how to keep the reader hooked. I see that you haven't updated in quite a while and I have ran out of chapters :'( please don't let this be the end, (begging you on my knees hands together fingers clasped raised up) my imagination needs more of your story telling genius.
Can't express how much I loved reading both 'Perseverance' and 'Braving it in the New World'... you've really captured the spirits of each of the turtles in these stories. And if that wasn't enough, you actually got me to not only LIKE Charlotte, but love her. I've grown very fond of her... She is everything my sweet Donnie deserved... and vice versa. Lisa was a very believable "bitch". I wanted to smack her a few times nearing the end, but hey, that's how you know you've flushed out some great characters; when the reader loves the lovable and genuinely despises the a**holes lol. I haven't read the next spin-off story yet. You know... the one where Donatello has passed on. I'm afraid you did a great job at making Donnie extremely lovable and I can't bring myself to read that one just yet. I need a minute. Lol but I'm sure it will be just as addictive and great as the others I've read. I would speak on how attractive I found Raphael to be in this story, but I don't want to come off as a perv. Haha, so I'll just give you my best virtual-high-five I can muster up and thank you for every lip bite, eyebrow raise and dirty thought that I experienced as I read. Lol you rock... and this is coming from a chick who is an advent reader of Anne Rice, Kelley Armstrong and Rachel Vicent books. If you ever decided to write fictional books of your own some day, I would gladly purchase them in the future. Never stop writing, because you really have a gift for this... seriously. I couldn't stop reading this until I was finished. That's how good you are. Arigato!
When r you going to update
I hope you continue to work on this story. Can I tell you how awesome it is? I check every few days or so to see if there are any new chapters/updates. I hope you find inspiration again soon.
