rate_review Reviews

OMG! that was so fucking awesome its beyond words! u r a goddess!

I think the characterization here was perfect. Amazing job.

Well, I can happily say, that you have opened my mind to a whole new Fandom, which I am slowly becoming quite the fantard of. This is a really well written story, and now I'm gonna go read the rest of your stuff. :)

concrit: 'doona'? I think that must be an Australiaism. Comforter or bedcover in the US. There's a couple of other little typo-ish things too. (I think 'she gently hemmed' is supposed to be 'she gently hummed')

Otherwise, while this *totally* isn't my thing, yay! stuff from you! Yay! Conconsenual abuse! (also, hm, I'm seeing a slight Morrison, yet still in-character, influence)