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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the Tim/Raven you keep them in character..Tim emotional...and Raven always caring for her friends!!! =D
I really enjoyed to read something between those two
I really enjoyed to read something between those two
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Job!
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well it's not bad although some of the scenes were more rushed then others and I was looking forward to a bit more in those few ones. But it's still okay maybe if it had been a chapter per each woman with all of them the same length and effort equally put in that would have made this better.
But still not bad.
But still not bad.