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April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore it. lol Flows very well... and gives the sense that there's more of a RELATIONSHIP here than just a one-shot sex scene. I like all the development leading UP to the sex. Made it so that we really knew her before we saw them fuck. And that adds a certain amount of intimacy you sometimes (often) don't see in erotica. Good job!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot story!!!