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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, at first I thought this pairing would suck. But I decided to give this fic a chance and I must say that you made an awesome job with it! Definetely gonna need a cold shower now... Your English is good. Just one thing - you keep switching between past and present, which is a bit annoying. You need to work a bit on your grammar too, but it's not that bad. Otherwise, great story. Hope you'll write another LH/Donnie slash some day!