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schedule
January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poorly written and shallow. No plot, no real story, just sex. I would try some writing lessons.
schedule
June 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Carrie-
Whew!!!!!!!!!!! :::::Standin Ovation::::: Well done my little sister.. Well done. I was not aware that you could write as so. You really ought to consider writting as a profession. You have my highest rating. Keep up the goodk. k. That indeed was deep.. lol
Kim-
Whew!!!!!!!!!!! :::::Standin Ovation::::: Well done my little sister.. Well done. I was not aware that you could write as so. You really ought to consider writting as a profession. You have my highest rating. Keep up the goodk. k. That indeed was deep.. lol
Kim-
schedule
May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yum yum, gimme some! Excellent job for a adult fan fiction virgin ;)