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for Perseverance

by EvaBrick

schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! A new chapter! XD Keep 'em coming! XD
person Lola Hard
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, Eva!

This is one of the BEST Turtle/OC romantic stories I've ever read. And, I'm happy/proud/ecstatic that it was also the firt TMNT story of such kind I've ever read :) You are a brilliant writer, with a wonderful style, a spot-on grasp of characterizations, a good feel of atmosphere and the natural flow any novelist could dream about. I love everything about the story: the dialogues, the fighting scenes, the smut episodes... You name it, I love it. And what thrills me to my core is my suspicion that you are going to pair each and every turtle off with a nice girl in the future (I hope I haven't misinterpreted the undercurrent of longing for love in the turtles' behavior) ;)
Please, keep going, I'll be eagerly waiting for updates!

Love and hugs,
Lola
person Lola Hard
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! By the way. Donnie is my favorite turtle, so it only adds to my happiness about reading this fantastic story :)
And! I honestly think that bo staff is the best weapon of all. I think if I ever had an opportunity to learn martial arts I'd choose it as my weapon of choice. No kidding. Graceful, functional, visibly harmless - and so ass-kicking one would be on his butt before he could say "what the...?" XD
So. My admiration with the chapters 22 and 23. Really, really good :)

~Lola
person EvaBrick
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the nice reviews, guys. I'm having a really shitty (can I say that in a review?) time lately and your kindness means a lot to me.
There'll be a smut chapter up in about an hour.
Love you!
person ShelbyO
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay for more chapters!
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME chapter! XD
person vixey
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol thats too funny...now im picturing shredder in a bo peep costume with rocksteady and bebop as the sheep
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter?! It must be my birthday! XD Great chapter, and I can't wait for more! XD
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! They said the 'L' word! XD Great chapters! XD
person kaitlyn
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is absolutely the best piece of fanfiction i have ever read. you are an amazing writer and i really hope you make a stories for all the rest of the turtles.

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