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for Perseverance

by EvaBrick

person sayin_girl
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your story for some time and absoluty love it! I look forward to every new chapter. I don't write reviews much to anything but I wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorites. I can't wait to see where this story goes next, although I'm crossing my fingers and hoping for splinter to get better and for all the turtles to meet nice girls. I'm a sucker for happy endings ^_^

keep up the great work! many of us love reading your story
person lolahard
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, there's a chance for Splinter! Charlie, you smart girl! :) *dances happily with a pleading look towards heaven* Please, let this work, let this work!

More, I demand more! :D
person Vixey
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHHH evil Cliffhanger!!!!! hurry up with next chapter i cant wait!!!!
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O,O A way to save Splinter?! Oh, that would be SO awesome! XD
person ShelbyO
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know none of my reviews differ but I just wanna keep telling you how much I enjoy the story. And I like the leo lisa storyline. She seems like a crazy cool feisty chick to balance leo's collected leader personality. Still lovin it
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh so much action! Please update soon! XD
person lolahard
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, this story is a romance/action/humor masterpiece! :) I’ll start with what impressed me the most. Seeing as I’m Russian, the fight scene at the museum just tore me to bits. I mean, FINALLY there’s a good use to Lenin’s possessions :D And I suppose the entire phenomenon of communism was meant to exist to fulfill its sole and fateful purpose: help Leo and Mikey! :D Man, this is priceless ^_^ (And just in case you get worried, or something – I’m absolutely not offended, not in the least ;))

Now, action… So yummy, I’m salivating all over my keyboard. Literally. Can it be considered disturbing that I feel satisfaction every time the turtles slash at somebody or snap someone’s neck these last chapters? I think I’m really mad about how the Shredder and his morons of different sizes and mutation degrees have been treating the girls *growl*

And I love how you show that everything the guys have learned during their training is extremely useful in a fight. I guess Charlie is really happy that she’d insisted that guys train more instead of spending some time alone with Donatello. She is really good for him, and she is a true family who understands what’s important in their lives…

Leo/Lisa. The Triple Yahoo, dammit! =D I won’t say anything else, I’ll just let you know that I like it to bits, and will wait for more ^_^

Update as soon as you can! *squirms on the edge of her chair*
person EvaBrick
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you guys are gonna make me cry... :)

Just so you know, if you've read every chapter, then you've read the equivalent of 210 pages or 92470 words, which is a the size of a long novel. I'm kind of pleased about that. :)

Thanks for the reviews - they make me really happy. :)

Love you lots!
person ShelbyO
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon! The anticipation is gonna kill me
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES! Leo to the rescue!! XD

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