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I wasn't expecting much from this story, perhaps some silliness, but as I read it, I found myself both laughing...and strangely flushed. Great story. The narrative and dialogue were great, and I found myself...thinking "why didn't anyone pair these two up sooner?" I hope you write more comic fic.

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the only thing that bugged me (he he) was that part where you stated that spiders are not bugs. They are bugs just not insects. Bugs include insects:) (sorry i'm a bit picky when talking about bugs) but i love this story! you need another one like this. keep it up and i look forward to reading your other works.

Quality dude. I hope you write more like this.