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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. A few things: try and get a editor or something to fix your grammar, pretty sure a lemon needs a NC-17 setting. Keep going though.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wel, not to be a asshole or anything but ur sentence structure is kinda off. but the story is kick ass! kepp it up man!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome fic man I loved it. Keep it up man And I can't wait for the next chapter dude. Well Hope you update soon.
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! keep it up hoping a threesome come up soon. ~,^
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I lovin this story already, it's great just wish there was more. Oh, I also thought you put the story line across well.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, it was boring in the beginning but I know that its just getting started update soon. Peace
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please. I never see Starfire/BB. But I love that pairing. But Starfire/BB/Raven I've been looking for one of these forever.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude! that was cool! *more ecstatic than "happy"* more more more more more more more!
*reviewer and "happy" start singing the "more" song*
*reviewer and "happy" start singing the "more" song*
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Well? This first instalment is rather intruiging. Top marks at snagging my attentions .
I look forward to see how this develops.
The Dark one
BrianDarksoul~
I look forward to see how this develops.
The Dark one
BrianDarksoul~