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You dont suck, you never sucked, you rule, remember that!

That is weird, I sound exactly like your sister... I'm good at math (honors class, woot!), I write well, I write fanfics, I make graphics, I'm lazy as all hell, the only difference is that I can't live without hot angsty yaoi lemons. >.< I need them to make my computer lemony fresh.
This isn't really much of a reveiw so far... Hmmm.
Right well, it was short (nothing wrong with that), but you had a lot of typos (maybe you should get a beta), and Slade seems a little OOC (not much though). There you go, constructive critisism at it's best! >.<

You're a girl? I never would've guessed that. The story is great, it's a real turn-on.

good work dude. keep it up.

Torture and humiliation? I love it.

Ok, it's not bad but look closer at the spelling of your words next time and make it longer, update soon please.