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I'm begging you for more

please update

Not bad for a first.

O.O;; Wow... how... fast! It seemed like a nice idea from the start, and yes I like it now but... like I said, it was really, really fast! I mean- ZOOOOOOMMM!!! and you're gone fast! I struggled just to keep up! And there may be a little redundence that could be tidied up on, just a little... and um... mmm... maybe a little bit more descriptions? And not just in the lemons, like slow down, take time to describe and paint a mental picture from beginning and end for the readers to see so we can witness exactly what you do. And not only that, maybe a few more thoughts from one or the other? That could be good too. Still, I applaud you for your lovely effort! Truly! I'm sure you'll improve wonderfully when you get the feel of things. And as long as it's Robin/BB I'll be there to read it! Ta, love!

not enough detail,and im not really into the whole gay Robin and Beast boy thing...but thats because i am a girl and i want them:)
Keep it up would love to read the next chapter!