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for A Straight Line

by BobsThalamus

person Jaded
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more!!
person cross64
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. ^_^ Eager to see more in the future.
person Kenshin-gotenks
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my this is great, and you know, you could actually imagine this really happening! Please update soon! I love Raven/Bb!!!
person Bleach
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, it's really interesting. The shower scene was awkward, uncomfortable, seedy and perfect. Love the Hedwig and the Angry Inch lyric at the beginning.
person Libra Angel
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was good! Best BB\Rea fanfic I have ever read! Please keep going. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Also couldn't Raven heal BB?

~Libra Angel~
person jozepy
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good
i like it
like the ending
hope you do more soon
person WitchKing
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done, old bean. The story was a smashing success. I do so love a plot drivin story so much more then mindless lust filled drivle. Keep up the great work. Hope to see more soon.


So Sayeth...WitchKing ph34r
person titan guy
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great make a sequal plz
person Pndrgn
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you freaking rock!!! That was bloody amazing!!!! O God I can't wait to read more of this! Its just awesome. I love how descriptive you are without changing the characters too much. Sweet!!
person Takun
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME. In character to a point, (I think it probably would take one of them dying to scare the other one into fessing something up) well detailed and an excellent sex scene. You probably wont tell me but.. IS BB gonna die by the end of it all?

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