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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun read. The story flowed well. Beast Boy being a good drawer fits what I know of him. I would like to see what comes next in the story. The only problem I saw was that you need to describe people and things a bit more then you do but other then that I didn't see anything wrong so keep up the good work. Signed a fan of Raven and Jinx
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Can't wait to see more!
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make the next chapter this very good
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far,the caracters seem as much like the original as I could ask...please update.
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice work keep going
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very nice start. I think it will be interesting to see how the plot unfolds. Oh, I love the use of the internal Rae s.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting initial chapter.
I wait paitently for more, Failure to comply will result in your dreams being invaded by the 'Crazy Frog' Ringtone nucance and multiplied by Trigon in a pink tutu dancing the swan lake singing that KISS song I was made for loving you AT you until you update
*Smirks in a slytherin way*
I wait paitently for more, Failure to comply will result in your dreams being invaded by the 'Crazy Frog' Ringtone nucance and multiplied by Trigon in a pink tutu dancing the swan lake singing that KISS song I was made for loving you AT you until you update
*Smirks in a slytherin way*