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April 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There were a few details, like the way you wrote some of the first person point of view in some parts, that didn't felt quite right; but overall what you wrote kept me reading, i wish they would manage to implement a way to get email notifications of new chapters for stories i'm interested in...
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September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Its a great story, and you should continue. If not for the fans then do it because you enjoy writting it
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so far i like what i have read and would like to see where this is going to lead. Good Luck and happy writing