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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, only a very very very minor error, that I thought I might share since...well to be honest I'm a neat freak, Ravens real name is Rachel Roth, but once again great story
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great story- just seemed to *work*, you know?
Have to second stuey on the opinion of the melodious staccato- not terribly familiar with the term, at least not in terms of reading music, but I do get what it means, so- that’s all good.
The simple set up was nice- kept things to the point, and so on…
Have to add my voice to the ‘hope you write more’ column…
Have to second stuey on the opinion of the melodious staccato- not terribly familiar with the term, at least not in terms of reading music, but I do get what it means, so- that’s all good.
The simple set up was nice- kept things to the point, and so on…
Have to add my voice to the ‘hope you write more’ column…
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS AWSOME U DONT NEED TO IMPROVE IT
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEE!!!!! i love it!!!!! and your other story!!!
Love ya!
Kai
Love ya!
Kai
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it, can't find any gripes here. liked the phrase "mellodious staccato" with star's voice. very excelent descriptive terms, but i wonder how many people understood it. not everyone can read music after all.
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February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. This was seriously good. You'd better keep it up. I can't be the only one to make quality yuri teen titan fics here. lol
Note, you might want to dumb a couple of things down a bit for your next fic, I am in university and I had a hard time following...like one or two parts. For some, that's all it takes to aggrivate them.
Note, you might want to dumb a couple of things down a bit for your next fic, I am in university and I had a hard time following...like one or two parts. For some, that's all it takes to aggrivate them.
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February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic
very well written
how do you pronounce raven's real name?
it confused me
very well written
how do you pronounce raven's real name?
it confused me