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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol what a wonderful story. i like how the boys werent completely ignored. very funny indeed.
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that wasn't too bad. It's more authentic compared to what I've read prior to this. The only thing that threw me off were the language used during the climax scene. I guess Raven could blurt out profanity, but it seemed a little out of character. But, then again, probably so is Raven and Starfire getting together, so it all works out in the end. Again, great job and you have my kudos for another fic. Maybe you could throw Terra into the mix next time.
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Best Yuri I've ever read. I'm strictly a Raven/Cyborg fan, but recently I've been getting obsessed with finding out how two females can have sex (I got a Yu-Gi-Oh challenge for a Mai/Shizuka lemon and I can't resist a challenge) so I read over a hundred Yuris for six different shows. This is the best by far. Five stars, hands down.
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I didn't get to finish. Like I was saying, this rocks, but you might want to get a beta reader if you write any more. If you can'tvoluvolunteer just because I have nothing better to do.
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Highly descriptive, as well as realistic (relative to the situation). I applaud your work, though you may want to have a friend read your next installment first in order to spot any grammar or spelling mishaps.
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August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have a very well written and visual fic. Dude, you definately know how to do the good stuff. And with Star having the big tongue, that was plain cool. I hope you continue to do it and I look forward to keep reading.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was great you but ther shuld have been at last some kind of power flow from raven e ven if it dosen do enay thin her power is driven by amositens and whats more powerfull thuve uve in that deparment think on that one and then write another story a bout these two agien
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
totaly awsome dood, i was practically jizzing my pants! you nailed Raven and Starfire's personalities down, and you know thier bodies as if u were thier doctor. Totaly awsome, hope to read more frum ya.
P.S. i got my own non-adult TT fanfics on fanfiction.net, my sn is vega-artemis. Read them and tell me if u think i could make a good lemon out of whatdoindoing.
P.S. i got my own non-adult TT fanfics on fanfiction.net, my sn is vega-artemis. Read them and tell me if u think i could make a good lemon out of whatdoindoing.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahahahaha!
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude this story fucking kicks ass! you need to write more this was fucking great!