schedule
May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Overall it was rather good...But the abundance of typos and what not really broke the flow for me. Most everything could be fixed with a proof read and run thru spell check. If you can, try and get a beta to read over your work before you post it.
schedule
May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it please don't let it be the end