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by YamisAkuchan

person Robin
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could you do something so wicked.Slades more dispicable.Please dont hurt my friend Bb hes had enough of a hard time with these test.
PLease let Bb and Raven live together happily.Sniff damnit.*Starfire walks in and kisses robin*.
Murph augh goshta go.Letsh Bb besh happy.
person LoveGuardian
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are utterly and totally evil. I can't believe Dayner won! It was rigged. He wasn't creative or anything. The stupid judge is so biased. Hmm, I wonder if Dayner will want to stick with Raven, or if he will choose Terra or his old girlfriend (I can't remember her name). Update wuickly to make up for the evil cliffy! Good chapter, by the way.
person capcomfreak4life
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, care to tell what the tie-breaker's gonna be or will that be kept secret till next episode.
i can wait, also, there are alot of people enhacing Terra's bitchy side, i guess nobody likes her.
anyway, i like how this is going and i know the ending's gonna really be exciting, keep it up!
person Wysteriafox
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!! You have to write more. Actually that was an OK lemon. I'm kinda glad it didn't have too much detail, ya know? Some authors put too much and then it loses it's edge, yada yada. You get it. Lol.
person WystiFox
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you should have both! Have a gorey battle between Dayner and Beast Boy, in which Dayner dies, and Terra decideds to kill herself because of it! Then Rae and BB can just confess their undying love with a *lemon*. Just a suggestion though, but I vote both! Yay! Lol.
person asdf
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do a Rob/Star lemon!
person BeastBoy
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
C'mon I don't know when U posted the last chapter, but I want the next one
person BeastBoy
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great and I want more soon! Please!
person BeastBoy
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Pauses kissing Raven*
That was great, but I need to stop every once and a while to breathe. Write the next chapter so I can! =)
person wysteriafox
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey you! Yes you, the one writing this story! You need to finish! For once the story is more than sex, rape, and murder! Lol. Like the storyline and you dipicted BB as the passionate guy he is perfectly.

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